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MonsieurChuchote
>> #462876
Posted on 2022-03-22 23:38:15
Score: 1 (vote Up)
Very happy with the writing, but less happy with the look. Turns out this concept is a formatting nightmare! And I couldn't switch the background from pure white since our grumpy team captain is reaching out of the frame and casting inconvenient shadows.

Anyway! I hope it makes sense and I hope it's enjoyable!

thedragontamer1
>> #462880
Posted on 2022-03-22 23:52:25
Score: 1 (vote Up)
Love the story, but I always found that it gets exponentially harder to structure dialog the more people you have talking.

Still, I love the plot of the hard-ass captain turned submissive and the rest of the crew going along with it.

As always, I enjoy seeing more of your work on here.

ghost13
>> #463055
Posted on 2022-03-24 07:14:29
Score: 1 (vote Up)
MonsieurChuchote said:
Very happy with the writing, but less happy with the look. Turns out this concept is a formatting nightmare! And I couldn't switch the background from pure white since our grumpy team captain is reaching out of the frame and casting inconvenient shadows.

Anyway! I hope it makes sense and I hope it's enjoyable!


This is amazing, Monsieur! *Thumbs up*

thedragontamer1 said:
Love the story, but I always found that it gets exponentially harder to structure dialog the more people you have talking.

Still, I love the plot of the hard-ass captain turned submissive and the rest of the crew going along with it.

As always, I enjoy seeing more of your work on here.


...Pretty sure the crew are also under his control...

Kikosz
>> #463085
Posted on 2022-03-24 16:30:02
Score: 1 (vote Up)
I like it a lot. The peanut gallery added a nice touch to the unaware thing :)
Im really not sure how you could make it better without doing animation.
Its good its hot , its juicy :3

BrainwashedforYou
>> #463204
Posted on 2022-03-25 11:14:38
Score: 0 (vote Up)
Think we should add a tag, something along the lines of "side commentary," since those are tending to be either super funny or super hawt almost every time I see them :)

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