Posted on 2014-05-06 03:21:36
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Context, Stymero is basically a weaponized love potion

Posted on 2014-05-06 03:34:00
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Never use "hypnosis" as a tag.

Now, time for some criticism. First of all, I'd recommend learning how to do some editing. I'm guessing you made the eyes glow pink in this one, and that looks fine, but in the pic before this, for example, your editing is lacking. Just experiment with different effects or poke around the forums where you can find a couple handy tutorials (you may need to search for them). Secondly, text. I'd recommend picking a font that doesn't look like the default font on your word processor. Also, don't use white background and black text all the time. Pick colors that complement the colors of the pic.

As for the content of the text, I believe there are 2 kinds of successful text manips: The kind that use the text to tell a story, and the kind that use a small amount of text (like speech bubbles) to enhance the idea of MC in the pic. In this case, your text is kind of like the "Context" comment you left. It basically just tells us that the girl is indeed being MC'd. It would be better if we had a bit more to go on. A little before and after, perhaps. I just think that text manips that take this approach should have more meat than this.

Posted on 2014-05-06 10:24:02
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Okay, I don't know if this will help but the character tags should be Amy Yuuzuki and because it mentions the character in the text, Ian Yorkland maybe should be in there?

Posted on 2014-05-06 16:33:13
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I'd like to see one where Yayoi does it to Amy or maybe Fuko

Posted on 2014-05-08 12:58:50
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Ayuri Konno was 16 in 2013.