Posted on 2014-05-09 06:54:52
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BEHOLD! PART TWO!

EDIT:
Part1. hypnohub.net/post/show/14337
Part2. YOU ARE HERE.
Part3. hypnohub.net/post/show/14364

Posted on 2014-05-09 07:34:55
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Love the story! Wish there was a different picture for part two though =(

My only criticism is how often you repeated "Now, from now on".

Posted on 2014-05-09 07:38:47
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Sorry it's a habit, It's part of the rhythm I get into when I'm trancing my subs.

I did manip the picture to help illustrate what's going on but I guess it's not as easy to see as I had hoped, ah well we live and learn. Hopefully the last one will tickle your fancy a tad more.

Posted on 2014-05-09 07:42:12
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I agree with the "Now, from now on" I think she can just directly tell him what she want like,
You will x whenever I y
instead of
From now on you will x when I y

Multiple pics would have been great, or even change the face and stuff, if you cant do it yourself people are always willing on the manip request threads

Posted on 2014-05-09 07:45:01
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Oh no, sorry, the manip is fine! I was just meaning I would have liked to have seen a separate pic used/manipped for part two, but if there's only one pic as a source there's nothing you can do about that. Sorry, wasn't thinking too well when I posted the comment ~_~

Posted on 2014-05-09 07:46:32
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I did though... I blanked the subs eyes in this one and added a slight pink glow mirroring the layer under the purple shine of the dom's eyes to emphasize that the sub is under trance. I guess I should have gone with something more overt.

EDIT: Hmm... Okay I think I might be able to pull off a different image for part 3 >:D

Edit 2. Electric fucktons: well it's a different picture but by the eye I don't think I can do much to manip it apart from the caption.

Posted on 2014-05-09 15:17:58
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THE MOMENT I SAW THE THUMBNAIL I KNEW I'D LOVE THIS

THANK YOU BASED VALLORN