Ogodei-Khan said: Wild Words is better, though now you should go deeper down the rabbithole. Fennario, Jokerman. A few others i cannot recall.
Personally, i'd prefer if they were less wordy. The amount of text you had with the One Piece one was just about right for attention spans.
I dunno, this one's a perfect length for me. Not too long, not too short. I'd love to see the concept expanded on- this hits a lot of my fetishes, personally.
Ogodei-Khan said: Personally, i'd prefer if they were less wordy.
Ther's definitely a lot there and It'll probably turn people off, but I'm a nerd who enjoy's reading. especially smut... smut about ponies even more so.
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this is beautiful
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hwd I love you
this is beautiful
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
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And hypnotized hypnotist? Double yes!
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Personally, i'd prefer if they were less wordy. The amount of text you had with the One Piece one was just about right for attention spans.
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Wild Words is better, though now you should go deeper down the rabbithole. Fennario, Jokerman. A few others i cannot recall.
Personally, i'd prefer if they were less wordy. The amount of text you had with the One Piece one was just about right for attention spans.
I'd like to see more fonts. Also, I'm trying to mix it up with how much text I use.
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Wild Words is better, though now you should go deeper down the rabbithole. Fennario, Jokerman. A few others i cannot recall.
Personally, i'd prefer if they were less wordy. The amount of text you had with the One Piece one was just about right for attention spans.
I dunno, this one's a perfect length for me. Not too long, not too short. I'd love to see the concept expanded on- this hits a lot of my fetishes, personally.
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I love this so much it's unhealthy
Personally, i'd prefer if they were less wordy.
Ther's definitely a lot there and It'll probably turn people off, but I'm a nerd who enjoy's reading. especially smut... smut about ponies even more so.