Posted on 2014-05-24 23:07:50
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I think this is the first Kaafan33 picture I've actually liked. I hope they continue to improve.

Posted on 2014-05-25 02:03:25
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Thanks for the brutally honest description there xD. I am trying to improve, its a slow trial and error process. I honestly wish more people were critical of me. Thanks for the upload here.

Posted on 2014-05-26 05:42:06
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No problem :) This picture is very cute; of course, it helps that it's of a character I like. I would encourage you to study anatomy from real life or real life references if you don't already; it's much more helpful than trying to imitate an anime style. Furthermore, I'll be honest and say I really don't like the way you draw breasts. That's first and foremost probably what puts me off your art (so it probably helps that Sayaka's are covered here haha.) It would also be nice to get more of a sense of depth from your faces (again, I do get that in this pic), and see more dynamic and varied poses. I'm not gonna try to give you advice because I'm not very good at drawing, but there is definitely a ton of awesome information out there.

I also like how Sayaka's cape is sticking out :)

p.s. If you're interested in more helpful critiques than this you could always try making a thread in our forum, there are a lot of friendly artist people around here.