Hey there it's me, ya boy, the half-hearted critic of unlikely's work. I have read Repair Guy all the way through. My verdict: I loved the bimbofication and mind/body control parts but I didn't like the piss-play(is that what it's called?). The writing was well executed and dramatic enough that I could power through the gross bits. I eagerly look forward to a sequel!
Glad everyone is enjoying the story! It was super fun to work on. I have plenty more ideas but would love to hear yours on what should happen to the mom
Hi, me again, I have more unorganized thoughts because culprit said they want to hear peoples ideas:
I was wondering why a bimbofication company would install both control and modification devices in an unsuspecting victims home rather than rent out a medical office and advertise themselves as a therapy/cosmetics business like good'old Bimbotech from mcstories? The Victims would come to them and any changes they undergo could be dismissed as "They just have really good life-changing surgery/counseling." But then I started thinking about AirBnB, why bother going to a crowded hotel full of potential witnesses when you could check into a little discrete crash-pad under a fake identity in a mostly foreclosed neighborhood? What I'm proposing is that the repair man was working for a hybrid of the previously mentioned fictitious and real companies. Maybe the organization has a secret name like AppBitches-n-Bimbos but in public it's shortened to AppB-n-B. Key thing is that the App works different for male and female users. For male users of the App, they can select the property they want to stay at and then configure the bodies and minds of the live-in staff (like the women turned cum-pdumpsters formerly known as Claire, Tiana, and Courtney) to match their sexual interests before their arrival. Female users will only be able to check into a rental, log into the wifi, become enslaved, then the "property owners" will emerge and order their new victim into the modification machine, turning their guests into bimbo-sluts. Hopefully other people will agree that the narrative and erotic potential for this premise is limitless.
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If you DONT usually like my writing, you DEFINITELY won't like the story, its got all my usual stuff.
Either way feedback is always welcome, especially if you'd like more stories or a second chapter of this one.
My email is available on Mcstories now too, so if you've been looking for that for some reason, now you have it lol
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I was wondering why a bimbofication company would install both control and modification devices in an unsuspecting victims home rather than rent out a medical office and advertise themselves as a therapy/cosmetics business like good'old Bimbotech from mcstories? The Victims would come to them and any changes they undergo could be dismissed as "They just have really good life-changing surgery/counseling." But then I started thinking about AirBnB, why bother going to a crowded hotel full of potential witnesses when you could check into a little discrete crash-pad under a fake identity in a mostly foreclosed neighborhood?
What I'm proposing is that the repair man was working for a hybrid of the previously mentioned fictitious and real companies. Maybe the organization has a secret name like AppBitches-n-Bimbos but in public it's shortened to AppB-n-B. Key thing is that the App works different for male and female users. For male users of the App, they can select the property they want to stay at and then configure the bodies and minds of the live-in staff (like the women turned cum-pdumpsters formerly known as Claire, Tiana, and Courtney) to match their sexual interests before their arrival. Female users will only be able to check into a rental, log into the wifi, become enslaved, then the "property owners" will emerge and order their new victim into the modification machine, turning their guests into bimbo-sluts.
Hopefully other people will agree that the narrative and erotic potential for this premise is limitless.
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Congrats on your first MCstories piece too gonna have to give that a read later~
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