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Chidadow
>> #493525
Posted on 2022-12-20 16:00:57
Score: 1 (vote Up)
I like the idea and picture but I would like if it was more sexual and dialogue-like. Otherwise good.

Anonymous
>> #493641
Posted on 2022-12-21 18:57:41
Score: 5 (vote Up)
I think you could improve by adding some descriptions and a little dialogue from the woman starting on the right side:

As soon as you saw her, you started to remember. How her perfect body had taken control of your mind, wrapping it around her finger, doing whatever she wanted. Her mouth drew into a smirk as she watched the realization hit you.

"This is what, the third time? It gets be *so* wet, watching the heat build between your legs. Do you remember what we did that first night?" Your cheeks reddened and she laughed. "I thought so. But as good as it felt having my lips around your cock, doesn't it feel even better doing what I tell you? That shiver of pleasure when you obey, even if you can't remember why."

"I'm too sexy to argue with, so you can just keep doing what you're told like a good boy. Maybe next time I'll let you jerk off to me in your office. But not today - you don't deserve it yet. So..."

*SNAP*

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