Posted on 2023-01-03 01:00:01
Score: 5 (vote Up)

'And a Becca had taken my place' God damn it. That typo isn't enough to get me to delete and reupload, but it still bothers me.

This is a double-length post intended to be a conclusion and/or summary of my first major series of manips on this site.

Posted on 2023-01-03 01:27:07
Score: 4 (vote Up)

Great manip. I really like this story you've created.

So this is the conclusion, as in, the end of the story? It's an interesting end to the story if that's the case. Not something I've seen before. Nice work ^^

I have to admit, I had hoped a bit for the Master to regain his old personality and re-take his harem. Or for Kathy to perhaps brainwash Becca and re-instate the Master, even if he's this paradox type-master. But maybe that's just before that's how things usually end up in hypno-stories. What you have made here is still great ^^

Have you considered perhaps making alternative endings, or more manips exploring branching paths for this story? Might be interesting.

Posted on 2023-01-03 01:41:55
Score: 3 (vote Up)

Looks like a good ending for Becca since she's got everything she could evver want and a bad ending for the previous master, still enslaved just playing a role.

But at least he's happy with the lovely strong lizard ladies who want to serve him.

Can't wait to see if we have returning characters in later series or if each series will handle a totally new unique cast. A good first story, looking forward to seeing what you create going forward.

Posted on 2023-01-03 01:43:59
Score: 2 (vote Up)

"I have to admit, I had hoped a bit for the Master to regain his old personality and re-take his harem."

The person they were is dead. The person they are is a construct. Twice over, even, given he was changed to obedience first.

Posted on 2023-01-03 02:00:50
Score: 2 (vote Up)

@Voidgolem This is to cap off the series with a new status quo, since this series would get unwieldy to read with too many parts and only one getting on point. Its also to avoid leaving anyone hanging in the air in case I decide not to come back to it, but a sequel series isnt off the table. I probably will do a few disconnected one-offs, any alternate endings would be in one of those.

Posted on 2023-01-03 02:24:09
Score: 2 (vote Up)

Its been a long while since Ive seen a manip story on the hub and Im honestly all for it and cant wait to see more of it.

Posted on 2023-01-03 04:12:53
Score: 0 (vote Up)

He still feels like a god damn SLAVE!!

Posted on 2023-01-03 04:14:44
Score: 0 (vote Up)

i stg thes bratty anons.. But i can't help but agree. He's simply a dominating slave..

Posted on 2023-01-03 05:13:59
Score: 1 (vote Up)

@He-ho It's actually partly down to those annoying Anons that I chose this ending. I made sure to steer it to a place that would not give people like that any satisfaction. If I relented, and changed the story to what they were asking for, I would effectively be saying that behavior like that is an acceptable way to give feedback, and that's not a message I want to send.

I wouldn't have wanted to have the harem Master back in charge at the end anyway, though, because this series is really meant to be about Becca's rise to power against a bad Master, and to undo her victory at the end wouldn't sit right with me. I chose to go for a happy medium where her Master still gets karma, but also gets to be happy, and shielded from Becca's mean-spirited revenge.

Posted on 2023-01-03 13:35:13
Score: 3 (vote Up)

A lot of people seem to be missing the important fact that being brainwashed by hot reptile girls is objectively hot.