Posted on 2023-04-17 22:31:32
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This is the first chapter of my series Brainwashing Eye a mind control thematic comic
This is the Story of David who discorver a power who can mind control others, want see what he gona do next?
look my Patreon then:
patreon.com/hypnossscomics

Posted on 2023-04-18 02:39:51
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I literally just read this yesterday on another site lol. Amazing comic man, keep it up

Posted on 2023-04-18 12:59:41
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If I could make a recommendation for you, maybe proofread your text/dialogue in the future. There's a lot of weird spelling and grammar mistakes.

Everything else is fine though