This was very good, only errors I noticed was two line of text to to close to the right edge of the image, one word is actually unreadable do to this as half the word is missing.
Those were the only errors I noticed and they are minor, just need a bit of rearranging of text
Other then that love the image and love the text very sexy ^.^
Would mabye have just made the Whole Picture between 50-150 pixels smaller just to try and remove the small amounts of rough edges and stuff to make it look alittle smoother. Other than that and the text there is not really much else, might want to expiriment With other color backgrounds and other fonts, but that is just bonus stuff.
Nice text/story! =D I didn't know they named the modded mobs.
I think it would be better if you somehow put the enderpearl in the picture and/or make it more obvious that she is under some sort of control in the actual picture.
Cradily said: I think it would be better if you somehow put the enderpearl in the picture and/or make it more obvious that she is under some sort of control in the actual picture.
I tried to white-out the eyes, and I also tried adding spiral eyes, but neither looked like something I would be proud of. I guess that kind of thing happens when you manip from an iPhone.
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Brutal critiques are encouraged.
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should cupa have the minecraft tag, if she's a part of a mod for minecraft.
but I love cupa so I hope the reason above doesn't get in the way of people uploading pictures of her.
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Those were the only errors I noticed and they are minor, just need a bit of rearranging of text
Other then that love the image and love the text very sexy ^.^
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The word that got cut off is "resistance", if anyone wanted to know.
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Other than that, Nice manip
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I think it would be better if you somehow put the enderpearl in the picture and/or make it more obvious that she is under some sort of control in the actual picture.
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I think it would be better if you somehow put the enderpearl in the picture and/or make it more obvious that she is under some sort of control in the actual picture.
I tried to white-out the eyes, and I also tried adding spiral eyes, but neither looked like something I would be proud of. I guess that kind of thing happens when you manip from an iPhone.