Posted on 2023-08-10 22:49:22
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Hey everyone. I'm an amateur 3D artist who is trying to replicate the style of the old videos that used to be on the hypnovideo website. I will be posting some of the best scenes from my new full-length video out on XVideos called Priceless Treasure

Here is the link to it https ://www.xvideos.com/video77855403/priceless_treasure

I hope you enjoy!

Posted on 2023-08-10 23:17:55
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I watched it, it was actually pretty good. I'd suggest maybe limiting the amount of text on-screen at any one point. Less is more, and all that. Sometimes being less descriptive gives your audience more room to imagine, and it can be hard to take in so much in one frame.
I'm only saying this out of love, mind you, cuz I thought this was already really good and I want to see you make even better videos in the future. All the best <3

Posted on 2023-08-10 23:45:10
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Oh no you are totally good! I need as much feedback as possible as I am an amateur at this and want to sharpen and perfect my craft. As for the description cards being wordy that was something I struggled with because I want these to be more than just sex fiction in my longer videos. I want to flesh out the characters with personality. Also it made pacing a pain in the editing of this, so for the future Ill try and keep words down per card. Again than you so much!

Posted on 2023-08-11 03:01:28
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I watched the video, and found it rather enjoyable. The only thing I would change (and just because this is a personal preference) is rather than it being suddenly "yes mistress" have more of a slow descent into mindlessness

Posted on 2023-08-11 03:31:25
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Glad you enjoyed it! I will take that into account for future projects that a more mindless way of talking might be preferable as the constant "Yes Mistress" might get stale after a while. Again thank you for the feedback!