Posted on 2023-09-20 20:54:15
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First time making a caption, and first time uploading to the Hub. I think I got all the important tags, and I tried to clean up as many of the AI's mistakes as I could, but I know the hands and the background are still pretty blobby, not within my skill to redo all of that. Hopefully you enjoy it anyways - I had fun making it, might do some more captions in the future if inspiration strikes.

Posted on 2023-09-21 01:37:58
Score: 3 (vote Up)

to be honest, i don't i care what other people say, this is awesome, i think you're being too hard on yourself (and this is coming from someone rarely ever feels proud of what they make) and hey it's doing way better than my captions ever did in terms of score

Posted on 2023-09-21 04:08:06
Score: 2 (vote Up)

Aw, thanks! Yeah, maybe I'm overly self-critical. But I know there's a lot of bad, low-effort AI art (I often filter it off this site myself!), and so even when it's just a vehicle for writing a caption around, I want mine to be *worth* looking at. So I put in a lot of time, trying to generate a good image, then fixing up perspective and trying to do *something* with those hands, rewrote the text a dozen times to get it to fit the space well, agonized over font choices to make it readable at full-screen without needing to zoom in.

But I also know that time spent does not necessarily mean quality of result, so I'm open to suggestions. Like if there were tags I forgot - did a mod add some of the ones like topless/bottomless, or were those automatic when I added nude? was I not supposed to tag myself as the generator and writer as well? - or if there's some pointers on laying text out better. I feel pretty confident in the main concept and execution, but little details are hard to nail sometimes.

Posted on 2023-09-21 18:12:08
Score: 2 (vote Up)

Yea that's really fun ! Also unaware stuff is always a soft spot for me <3

Posted on 2023-09-23 06:38:07
Score: 1 (vote Up)

I second what jigiyak wrote before. Its a good caption. Its something you get better at as you do it. And you get a better feel at what works and what doesnt for you.
This site is really not about perfection tbh. Its a mess of passion and horny excitement ;). You made it, you shared it. The polish is appreciated but not a requirement. Its worth looking at. End of story.

I personally wouldnt have noticied its an ai gen at all. Like most people i often use my phone. You did a good job cleaning it up.

About the font. You really cant go wrong unless you pick a wriggly font. The more important part is the color imo. As long as it pops its good. Light vs dark shades usually gets that done. Unless you start doing some text manipulation stuff, its not something to worry about. (Coming from a graphic designer who is anal about text clarity)

Posted on 2023-09-25 02:54:20
Score: 0 (vote Up)

Appreciate the kind words, everyone. I'm always hella nervous when I show off my work for the first time. I'm encouraged enough that I doubt this will be my last caption, though it might be a bit before I do another. Gotta have a good idea that actually works out.

As for the font, the typeface troubled me less than the size and spacing. I've often been annoyed by captions that are hard to read without zooming in, even when viewing them full-screen. I'm still not quite sure I nailed it, but I think I did better than most. Might try making it slightly bigger next time... which will force me to be even more concise with my writing. I could use the practice.