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  • Id: 18438
  • Posted: 2014-08-04 23:22:36
    by joshapi
  • Size: 1034x572
  • Rating: Questionable
  • Score: 22 (vote up)
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joshapi
>> #24496
Posted on 2014-08-04 23:23:43
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First attempt at something like this... Oh boy.
Mistress_Marea
>> #24507
Posted on 2014-08-05 01:17:00
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Gotta say I love the text *blushes*

The picture is slightly rough but looks well done and just needs a slight touch up here and there. Both text and pic are very good
greasyi
>> #24521
Posted on 2014-08-05 04:39:43
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It seems a tiny bit... minimal?

Like at the end of the day it's more or less just a woman jogging next to text of dirty talk. It's only MC on the barest technicalities.
Grim
>> #24526
Posted on 2014-08-05 04:57:28
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There is a minor spelling error, "It've" instead of "I've", unless homestuck trolls usually speak like that
Mistress_Marea
>> #24539
Posted on 2014-08-05 08:29:58
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greasyi said:
It seems a tiny bit... minimal?

Like at the end of the day it's more or less just a woman jogging next to text of dirty talk. It's only MC on the barest technicalities.

Most text based MCs I've seen are like that where it has the person saying things they don't notice.

Granted yes if you remove the text it's not really MC but with the text it most decently is MC
joshapi
>> #24599
Posted on 2014-08-05 21:06:06
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Grim said:
There is a minor spelling error, "It've" instead of "I've", unless homestuck trolls usually speak like that


Thank you Grim! I'll be sure to fix that asap.
joshapi
>> #24601
Posted on 2014-08-05 21:23:13
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joshapi said:
Thank you Grim! I'll be sure to fix that asap.


Oh. You can't edit the image. feck.
Nonetheless, I AM planning on doing a longer, more impressive version. Picture will probably still be slightly iffy, sad to say.
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