Posted on 2024-02-18 23:54:35
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Before a war starts in the comments (again)

1.) I understand you want there to be "more hypnosis" and the next comic will have that. This is my FIRST writing piece, It won't be perfect.

2.) There is a difference between being rude and constructive criticism, so don't say things just to be rude.

3.) Fact is this comic still belongs here as they are being mind controlled. If they were not, these characters would NOT be doing this. Please be respectful.

Posted on 2024-02-19 00:44:26
Score: 4 (vote Up)

Holy shit irl character development

Posted on 2024-02-19 05:04:12
Score: 6 (vote Up)

Glad this is still going, the art is great and the corruption is tasty.

Posted on 2024-02-19 12:32:23
Score: 2 (vote Up)

Genuinely, I am glad you are discussing with this.

The criticism I initially laid upon this was not one to discourage you from continuing, but because I do genuinely like the art and want to see it go places.

Its your work, you are free to do this how you like. Part of what would make this stronger is for there to be a little more progression. Typically this can be done Either in the descent of their control, a slight flutter in their conditioning, or in the discovery and conversion of those around them. The quick domination is definitely a fun method, but is typically for shorter comics for the sake of brevity. I love the personality swap, sometimes a way that can be fun is by having the subject revel in their control. As if theyre happy theyve been brainwashed and mock anyone that still thinks they can or want to go back.

Im interested to see where you decide to go in the future. I hope this is more constructive of a comment for you. Good luck with your art.

Posted on 2024-02-20 03:15:54
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I'm just hoping for at least a "Really? In front of my CHAAPS?" response from the girlfriend that this should be happening right in front of

Posted on 2024-02-20 21:05:09
Score: 4 (vote Up)

Yeah issue is that everyone on this site loves to cry foul whenever they see something they dislike and refuse to actually try and analyze something or even just blacklist if they dislike something before they start complaining. Its a big reason why so many artists hate this site. This story literally falls under mind control and has more mind control than a good half of this website but your art is popular so they are going out of their way to spam complaints. Dont listen to the whiners and make what you want to, and just know thus far you have yet to break a rule for hypnohub. listening to these haters is a quick way to burn out and its never worth it. And to the people that hate this, i can literally post 40 series off the top of my head that are just straight up porn and a quick phone flash that are on this site but nobody complains there or even the quality minimum which the majority of the 3d art on this site fails at yet nobody complains there? But god forbid glowhorn make mind control art with a heavy focus on sex rather than only mind control. Bruh this is hypocrisy and it gets very old seeing this all over the place

Posted on 2024-02-21 22:39:20
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People arent complaining just for the sake of complaining. They are complaining because its very easy to forget that its a hypnosis comic. The art is good and its popular on this site so of course its going to get criticism. The artist can make whatever they want but labeling the criticism they recieve as hating just makes you sound ignorant. The reason the others dont get talked about is because they're generally low quality and get brushed over as opposed to this which actually has potential

Posted on 2024-02-22 09:08:25
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You very clearly dont read the comments that often if you think people on hypnohub dont open posts to complain but it doesnt matter whether or not people forget when the comic literally is built upon mind control since absolutely none of these characters would do this willingly. Im calling people out because you all have absolutely not been giving much constructive criticism and have been whining that the story doesnt show the mind control as much in every post. The comic obviously has a story, its completely pointless to argue whether or not the story belongs here when this site allows for MUCH WORSE quality. Imsaying its absolutely hypocrisy and whether or not you want to make excuses the facts remain that this s by far the whiniest porn site i have ever seen and whether or not low quality posts get brushed over or not, what has me more disgusted than anything is how you all harass the author acting like they need to make more and more mind control every page. Glowhorn makes fantastic art and its irritating how the past 5 or 6 posts are filled with nonstop arguments. Literally my whole argument is people need to stop bitching or actually come up with a constructive argument which the past few posts in this comment have absolutely not been and its getting really old. Meh if you think im being ignorant because im telling people to stop bitching then you do you. I made my point

Posted on 2024-02-23 08:44:59
Score: 2 (vote Up)

What Darkwitt said I think is the key factor; a reminder every once in awhile, even just the classic eye spiral, would do wonders for this comic, though a moment of resistance or something beyond them just constantly going at it is what I, and I assume many others, take issue with. It just feels, to me, like you're a little too focused on the cheating when we're all here on this website specifically for something a little different.

I don't want you to stop the series or anything - unless it's negatively affecting finances - but just some constructive criticism on what would make it more interesting to myself.

Maybe I'm alone in this, but I also personally get a bit of a kick from the breaking of the control too; the aftermath, so I personally hope to see their be an ending (though not one with a sad ending - a comedic one, or perhaps an embarrassed one.