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DragonIce
>> #29642
Posted on 2014-09-24 00:13:50
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That is my first attemp to write something... I did nothing to the image... Just made up the story.
I feel like I have failed to express what I wanted =(

Subject is supposed to be in the middle.

Please, leave comments ^w^
locust
>> #29648
Posted on 2014-09-24 01:57:45
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DragonIce said:
That is my first attemp to write something... I did nothing to the image... Just made up the story.
I feel like I have failed to express what I wanted =(

Subject is supposed to be in the middle.

Please, leave comments ^w^


I haven't said this.......ever.....but WTF is between her legs? (and bitting on the other girl (r).
DragonIce
>> #29649
Posted on 2014-09-24 02:02:48
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locust said:
I haven't said this.......ever.....but WTF is between her legs? (and bitting on the other girl (r).

Poorly drawn cat... And those are his front legs not teeth.
locust
>> #29650
Posted on 2014-09-24 02:03:31
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DragonIce said:
Poorly drawn cat... And those are his front legs not teeth.



That cat need to be taken to a vet......the day it was born.
Yugan
>> #29652
Posted on 2014-09-24 02:32:51
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Well, not bad for a first attempt. I like it. ^^
Soapy_Foten
>> #29672
Posted on 2014-09-24 06:43:27
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pretty nice. I love how even with her memories she wants to succumb to her new master.
NightingaleJune
>> #29676
Posted on 2014-09-24 07:08:32
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There's more than one spelling error in the very first sentence and it's littered with other grammatical errors.

Nice idea, but you need a beta reader.
alalap
>> #29689
Posted on 2014-09-24 09:39:28
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Aw, man. Dark red on black? Come on.
strangeperson
>> #29696
Posted on 2014-09-24 12:08:50
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NightingaleJune said:
There's more than one spelling error in the very first sentence and it's littered with other grammatical errors.

Nice idea, but you need a beta reader.


This. Overall I liked it. The picture is great and the actual story is good. But there are a few grammar errors in the story. I would definitely recommend having someone proofread it a few times.
DragonIce
>> #29703
Posted on 2014-09-24 16:30:02
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NightingaleJune said:
There's more than one spelling error in the very first sentence and it's littered with other grammatical errors.

Nice idea, but you need a beta reader.

do you want to be one by a chance?
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