Posted on 2024-02-25 19:44:59
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Hello, my friends! I hope you are all doing well today. Here is the next page for the AU Crystal Castle series made by the great artist Wadevezecha

Realizing what she just said out loud, Twilight is quite embarrassed with herself. Luckily, Usagi seems quite flattered by Twilight's complement before she leads the pony-turned-human girl to Kimberly where the youngest Smith Sibling is just about ready to add to her princess doll collection. ^^

I really loved how this page came out. All the expressions are great. Twilight's worried and embarrassed expression is my favorite on the page and I really love how a 'bond' between the two seems to be going well. My original idea was to pair each of them up with a 'knight' who protects their princess with all their might... but if this is becoming popular, I may have to rethink that and have these two paired together instead. What do you all think?

More comics, pictures, and stories are coming soon. So until next time, take care and stay well everyone!

This comic page was made by the great artist :iconwadevezecha: and is posted with permission.

Posted on 2024-02-25 20:33:27
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Let the transformation process begin!! Gogogo

Posted on 2024-02-26 21:27:06
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I'm not sure what "It's actually quite flattering for you to say. Your quite lovely yourself." is supposed to be.
Possibilities:
- The first . should just not exist?Maybe should be a , ?
- That "your" really should be "you're" or "you are"?
- The "flattering" part don't make sense. After wrecking my brain, I wonder if you meant "It's actually quite flattering coming from you", but I don't get the connection with before, it could still be off.