Posted on 2024-03-22 03:55:28
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My first post. I hope i did everything allright. Wouldn't be possible without hypnosoul's work.

Posted on 2024-03-22 11:31:31
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I miss yyour deviantart content :(

Posted on 2024-03-22 15:26:53
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Mmmmmmmmm Hinata dom is an inspiration <3

Posted on 2024-03-22 20:22:10
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Hey, it's pretty nice for a first post!
Bit of criticism tho, I think there could be a much better sound to use... It didn't feel really good to hear imo.
Also, the filter at the end that made everything red could instead just be turned into a "eyes closing" effect instead. I think it would look much better and would also be more in-line with what you wanted to tell with your captions.

Still a good first post, looking forward to more!

Posted on 2024-03-22 20:58:53
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I agree, i need to find better way to do sound in the future, this one still worked better that it should for the way it was made. I think you are right with eye closing effect, even tho i like the red effect and think it is a part of story telling, i could reduce blur/red effect and layer it on top at end. Thanks for the feedback!

Posted on 2024-03-27 10:45:15
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Probably too late, but I'd also recommend starting the opacity of the text off at 100, and probably also start the text without the grain filter. Overall really great first video manip!

I also added a manipper tag for you, hope to see more soon.