Posted on 2024-04-19 04:38:58
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After this page, there is only one left in this series. I have taken into account what was said during this series as i wrote the next one. I hope the next series is more enjoyable to the folks here. It WILL have a more hypnosis then this one as well as more identifiable traits to know they are hypnotized. Thank You.

Posted on 2024-04-19 13:25:27
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You are cool my man. Please never take criticism personally. When people criticize your work, it means they love it and want it to get even better. Keep rocking on my dude.

Posted on 2024-04-20 03:59:33
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>> #541275

Honestly, I have a lot of respect for you taking this kind of thing to heart going forward. You got a lot of vitriol here (more than you probably deserved, even from myself) and found a positive direction to go forward with it.

absolutely draw what you like, but I am overjoyed to hear you'll be putting more hypnosis in your next comic.

Posted on 2024-04-20 10:22:44
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Haven't used this account properly in about a year, but I spent the time reading through all 3 of the comics in sequence, to get a feel for it. Honestly, I get the comment wars- I don't mind NTR, and the hypno should've been more pronounced.

Honestly though, I feel the bigger problem with these comics has been the lack of progression within them? Chapters 1 and 2 were virtually identical with swapped out characters, and 3 did at least give a payoff to those arcs, albeit in a depressing (but expected) way. But that's effectively 3, maybe 5 major plot points (if you consider the start of the active cheating to be plot points) in ~70 pages. Don't forget, the previous timeline mentioned that Artifact blocked the ability for Enid's GF to re-enter the timeline. This wasn't explored at all, despite the comic being absolutely massive. I get it's a comic we're reading to watch furries fuck, but it just seems bizarre to drop what could've been a plot point they would work towards as a one liner to presumably get off on completely losing her GF. That's fine.

NTR, Cuckoldry, those kinks are fine, any kink is fine! But honestly, I think you should make this a series of separate, but loosely related posts, rather than a comic. That way people don't flame you for the lack of hypno content on the hypno-site; post the hypno here, and the NTR on, say, R34 (Yes, I do know this doesn't break Hypnohub rules, they are under mind control, but it makes up 3/70 of the pages). I'd hope this makes it a bit better for all parties involved

You have amazing art, and clearly a good enough work ethic to put out this much content, just please do more with this story. 90% of these frames feel like they could be removed from the comics, and nothing would be lost. I'm glad you're taking criticism, I just hope you do more than just give the hypnotized characters spiral eyes!

Good Luck on the next comic, I look forward to it~