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solddate
>> #35156
Posted on 2014-11-11 00:53:01
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Very good concept this, though I guess the dialogue could use smoothing over. Though, really, I'm more interested in finding the original image.
HypnoHammer
>> #35159
Posted on 2014-11-11 00:55:12
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wow. this is very hot. wish Ichigo was included
DouDile
>> #35167
Posted on 2014-11-11 01:04:58
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solddate said:
Very good concept this, though I guess the dialogue could use smoothing over. Though, really, I'm more interested in finding the original image.


Actually when I found the original image almost the same as in the original manga, so I decided to change the dialogue and edit a little Orihime's eyes.
HypnoHammer
>> #35175
Posted on 2014-11-11 01:25:57
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DouDile said:
Actually when I found the original image almost the same as in the original manga, so I decided to change the dialogue and edit a little Orihime's eyes.


you still gotta include the source image. site policy
Ogodei-Khan
>> #35188
Posted on 2014-11-11 02:26:22
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Tighten up the dialogue and use a better font. You can't go wrong with Wild Words, even if it is a bit well-worn.
DouDile
>> #35193
Posted on 2014-11-11 02:58:08
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Ogodei-Khan said:
Tighten up the dialogue and use a better font. You can't go wrong with Wild Words, even if it is a bit well-worn.


Now it?
this product is for children?
HypnoHammer
>> #35195
Posted on 2014-11-11 03:12:07
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DouDile said:
Now it?
this product is for children?


dude, Bleach is on Adult Swim.
Ogodei-Khan
>> #35196
Posted on 2014-11-11 03:13:30
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What do either of those things have to do with my critique?
DouDile
>> #35197
Posted on 2014-11-11 03:16:22
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HypnoDragon said:
dude, Bleach is on Adult Swim.


tss friend ... you do not understand what he told you?
very well that is adult swim but I'm not talking about the picture!

The user does not like the way in which this dialogue, that's what I'm talking about -_-
DouDile
>> #35199
Posted on 2014-11-11 03:20:24
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Ogodei-Khan said:
What do either of those things have to do with my critique?


Review what you want, for me are welcome, just do not answer them because I do not want to argue with anyone.
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