Posted on 2014-12-08 02:59:04
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This is my first time posting on HypnoHub, so I might need some help with tags and such. Hope you guys like it.

Posted on 2014-12-08 03:12:23
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Welcome to the hub!

It's great to see more contributions (especially spiral eyes!)

As for the image itself, the good thing is that you didn't just throw it over her eyes, you actually laid over her pupil. I like the choice of spiral, however its a teensy bit pixelly and looks like its just kinda laying on top.

You might want to try a cleaner looking spiral, and I also recommend adding a little bit of shading to it. Kinda like how <<upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/b/bb/Anime_eye.svg|this eye>> is slightly darker at the top. You can do this with either gimp (what I use!), photoshop or paint.net or some other free photomanipulating tool and just painting with a darker shade on a higher transparency. If this doesn't make much sense, we also have the <<hypnohub.net/forum/show/2317|Tips and Tricks thread>> with lots of info on the topic! Hope that helps!

I don't want to be discouraging, rather the opposite ^^ I think it looks cute overall!

Posted on 2014-12-08 03:36:38
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Welcome to the site! I'm fairly new too and I don't post, but I love editing the tags cause then I feel like I'm contributing! :D

Posted on 2014-12-08 04:45:42
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll be sure to keep your tip in mind when I have the time to make another one.

Posted on 2014-12-08 07:07:18
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The biggest problem in my opinion is the lack of <<en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ali...iewer/File:Aliasing_a.png|antialiasing>> within the spiral itself. If you resized the spiral, there's probably an "anti-aliased" checkbox you missed. If not, then try applying a very weak blur filter to it, clean up the edges manually, or (probably the best option) find a new spiral.