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ClueElf
>> #54007
Posted on 2015-04-22 00:29:58
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These experimental beats I am playing shou
Should actually say:
These experimental beats I am playing should

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of the venusian hoemon
Should read:
of the venusian hormone

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please tel me the truth
Should read:
please tell me the truth

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mu tight as
Should read:
my tight ass

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created jus to make you submit to me
Should read:
created just to make you submit to me

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A good picture, a good story, but please use a spell checker. 1 or 2 typos is understandable, but 6? If English isn't your first language, then please have someone who's more fluent in English look at the text before you post. This picture is pretty old, so I don't know if you'll read this, but... I like the picture and story, but 6 typos in the same picture is way too many.



HypnoShy
>> #54017
Posted on 2015-04-22 01:18:19
Score: 0 (vote Up)
ClueElf said:
These experimental beats I am playing shou
Should actually say:
These experimental beats I am playing should

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of the venusian hoemon
Should read:
of the venusian hormone

-----

please tel me the truth
Should read:
please tell me the truth

-----

mu tight as
Should read:
my tight ass

-----

created jus to make you submit to me
Should read:
created just to make you submit to me

-----

A good picture, a good story, but please use a spell checker. 1 or 2 typos is understandable, but 6? If English isn't your first language, then please have someone who's more fluent in English look at the text before you post. This picture is pretty old, so I don't know if you'll read this, but... I like the picture and story, but 6 typos in the same picture is way too many.




I am not the owner of the picture;the owner is HypSubject,i simply upload to this site. But i can assure you that in his recently work he improve her grammar.)

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