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  • Posted: 2014-12-19 20:54:33
    by Mr.H
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Mr.H
>> #39205
Posted on 2014-12-19 20:57:54
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First time I've tired to put some text on one of my own pictures! I'm not 100% sold on my writing but I hope everyone enjoys~
idunno
>> #39208
Posted on 2014-12-19 21:46:05
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First comment here ever since a year of knowing about this place, just because I like your stuff so much: I think it would be better to leave the backstory to the viewers imagination unless absolutely necessary, text is kinda redundant for single pictures, especially if everything is already understandable. Just my two cents.

Also is the chain from navel to clit is inspired by that Sleepymaid pic? We don't have nearly enough of those.
Codknight
>> #39209
Posted on 2014-12-19 21:56:40
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idunno said:
First comment here ever since a year of knowing about this place, just because I like your stuff so much: I think it would be better to leave the backstory to the viewers imagination unless absolutely necessary, text is kinda redundant for single pictures, especially if everything is already understandable. Just my two cents.

Also is the chain from navel to clit is inspired by that Sleepymaid pic? We don't have nearly enough of those.


I have the opposite opinion I love captions, on single pictures, this one is just missing a dom to the sub, other then that I like the caption.
Mr.H
>> #39210
Posted on 2014-12-19 22:06:31
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idunno said:
First comment here ever since a year of knowing about this place, just because I like your stuff so much: I think it would be better to leave the backstory to the viewers imagination unless absolutely necessary, text is kinda redundant for single pictures, especially if everything is already understandable. Just my two cents.

Also is the chain from navel to clit is inspired by that Sleepymaid pic? We don't have nearly enough of those.


I doubt I'll make too much of a habit of it, since I'm not nearly confident in my writing ability. I just felt it was a little more necessary than usual to give this a little more context. But I do agree with you, just leaving the image to speak for itself and letting the view put the scenario together themselves is often more appealing. I know I have my own imagined set up that gave me the idea to draw the picture in the first place, but I like to think of what others have thought of my art too.

Sleepymaid is always an inspiration. @_@
Melter
>> #39212
Posted on 2014-12-19 22:42:57
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idunno said:
Also is the chain from navel to clit is inspired by that Sleepymaid pic? We don't have nearly enough of those.


Out of curiosity, which picture?

Also, great picture Mr.H, love the caption too.

idunno
>> #39215
Posted on 2014-12-19 23:22:44
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Melter said:
Out of curiosity, which picture?

Also, great picture Mr.H, love the caption too.




This one: hypnohub.net/post/show/17...ss-brown_hair-candle-chai

Also Mr.H, are you still planning to draw more of those alien nanomachine girls?
Mr.H
>> #39223
Posted on 2014-12-19 23:49:14
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Melter said:
Also, great picture Mr.H, love the caption too.


Thank you~


idunno said:
This one: hypnohub.net/post/show/17...ss-brown_hair-candle-chai

Also Mr.H, are you still planning to draw more of those alien nanomachine girls?


I figured that was the one you meant and yep, I do love those kind of slave outfits if it wasn't clear enough already.

Eventually, though it may in comic or a sequence of images. Not sure yet but I do have at least one sketch of more of them stashed away.
ice_cream
>> #39363
Posted on 2014-12-21 05:51:41
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I actually quite like how you worded everything here, I vote for more text like this in future pictures, although a big part of that might be because I love the whole slave thing.
nc123
>> #39379
Posted on 2014-12-21 10:38:45
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Mr.H said:
I doubt I'll make too much of a habit of it, since I'm not nearly confident in my writing ability. I just felt it was a little more necessary than usual to give this a little more context. But I do agree with you, just leaving the image to speak for itself and letting the view put the scenario together themselves is often more appealing. I know I have my own imagined set up that gave me the idea to draw the picture in the first place, but I like to think of what others have thought of my art too.

Sleepymaid is always an inspiration. @_@


I'm not a huge fan of text on pictures, but I think that this picture in particular is waaaay better with some backstory. I looked at the picture and thought "not sure what's going on here" but after I read the story I thought it was favorite worthy.

And your writing is great! Keep using your own judgement on when to add a story or not!
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