Alright as a response to the feedback i tried to brighten the text to allow easier reading; and i lessened the harshness of the blushes. Now how is it?
I usually have banshou on my blacklist, but in going picture by picture I happened to come across the previous one... and now have made an exception for manips
Zeratulxxx said: The pictures great and the readability is good, but the wording is still terrible.
Well if you're referring to the fact that I don't use to many fancy words than yes that is indeed true..that's because I'm not a native English speaking person, therefore this had to be not the best of word choices. If you referrer to anything else than please specify your complaint. (just so I can improve when I try next time)
I think he's talking about things like the 'or example?' that Peach said... It makes very little sense given the context... Enough sense to where I understand what you were trying to say, but still very little sense.
Anon_3.141 said: I think he's talking about things like the 'or example?' that Peach said... It makes very little sense given the context... Enough sense to where I understand what you were trying to say, but still very little sense.
Well------------------------- that was a typo, I read over everything and somehow this little thing just stayed... yet if thats the only complain then well...mistakes were made. (it was supposed to be "For Example?")
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Now how is it?
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The pictures great and the readability is good, but the wording is still terrible.
Well if you're referring to the fact that I don't use to many fancy words than yes that is indeed true..that's because I'm not a native English speaking person, therefore this had to be not the best of word choices. If you referrer to anything else than please specify your complaint. (just so I can improve when I try next time)
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I think he's talking about things like the 'or example?' that Peach said... It makes very little sense given the context... Enough sense to where I understand what you were trying to say, but still very little sense.
Well-------------------------
that was a typo, I read over everything and somehow this little thing just stayed... yet if thats the only complain then well...mistakes were made.
(it was supposed to be "For Example?")
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I usually have banshou on my blacklist
Is it because almost every one of his pics is an inked drawing? I...don't understand why you'd blacklist his stuff. >.>;
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