aaaa animated animated_gif black_hair breasts caption caption_only dazed edgeofthemoon_(manipper) femsub happy_trance manip spiral_eyes symbol_in_eyes tech_control text topless unaware undressing video_game

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EdgeOfTheMoon
>> #44400
Posted on 2015-02-01 00:07:33
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Reup of my last manip with some fixed spelling/grammar

APNG version is here imgur.com/tcKR7nJ

Metals
>> #44418
Posted on 2015-02-01 02:28:09
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Rhythm Game hypnosis? I can dig that.

TerlRlr
>> #44464
Posted on 2015-02-01 10:13:14
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Still an error in the first line. "Emma had used to hate parties." Remove the had, used is already properly conjugated to past tense.

EdgeOfTheMoon
>> #44656
Posted on 2015-02-02 21:59:16
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TerlRlr said:
Still an error in the first line. "Emma had used to hate parties." Remove the had, used is already properly conjugated to past tense.


CURSES!

Thanks for the advice though. Only way I'm going to get better

Metals said:
Rhythm Game hypnosis? I can dig that.


A good rhythm game feels like a trance so it seems appropriate

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