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Cradily
>> #45370
Posted on 2015-02-08 07:58:07
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The text may be too small if you don't view the large version.

MindReaver
>> #45371
Posted on 2015-02-08 08:02:55
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Cradily said:
The text may be too small if you don't view the large version.


The text size didn't really bother me, what did bother me is some of the colors you chose. They blend in with the background a bit too much, to the point that it actually hurts my eyes to try and read it (my eyes are very sensitive).

Toasterladd
>> #45384
Posted on 2015-02-08 12:49:23
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It looks intentional, as we see her responding to cues we can't read.
Sorry about your eyes, but thats is a really cool affect, and I love it~
Favorited again, Cradily!

FalconFalcon
>> #45397
Posted on 2015-02-08 16:14:49
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Love the text fade effect.

TheSpoon
>> #45440
Posted on 2015-02-08 21:47:44
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FalconFalcon said:
Love the text fade effect.


And how only the sub's text is left as the induction blanks them out, as if we're taking a seat in their mind and hearing only their own words as they start to slip.

Cradily
>> #45543
Posted on 2015-02-09 19:42:02
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MindReaver said:
The text size didn't really bother me, what did bother me is some of the colors you chose. They blend in with the background a bit too much, to the point that it actually hurts my eyes to try and read it (my eyes are very sensitive).


Echoing what the others have said, it's supposed to fade away. You don't have to strain yourself to read it, it's not much different from what they've been saying since the beginning =P

Toasterladd said:
It looks intentional, as we see her responding to cues we can't read.
Sorry about your eyes, but thats is a really cool affect, and I love it~
Favorited again, Cradily!


FalconFalcon said:
Love the text fade effect.


TheSpoon said:
And how only the sub's text is left as the induction blanks them out, as if we're taking a seat in their mind and hearing only their own words as they start to slip.


Glad you guys(?) like it! Yay favs xD
Can't make those amazing gifs so I try to make my manips 'cool' in other ways.


Muddle
>> #45547
Posted on 2015-02-09 20:30:45
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Cradily said:
Can't make those amazing gifs so I try to make my manips 'cool' in other ways.


In my opinion, good writing goes a lot farther than a flashy animation when it comes to manips. Your writing flows nicely, establishes the context of the scene, and depicts the induction amazingly well.

Cradily
>> #45654
Posted on 2015-02-10 18:20:22
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Muddle said:
In my opinion, good writing goes a lot farther than a flashy animation when it comes to manips. Your writing flows nicely, establishes the context of the scene, and depicts the induction amazingly well.


This is going to get to my head xD

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