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  • Id: 25750
  • Posted: 2015-05-05 14:21:22
    by VioletRiot
  • Size: 900x950
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  • Score: 8 (vote up)
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VioletRiot
>> #55808
Posted on 2015-05-05 14:24:40
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Heeyyyyy so, I'm uploading another drawing with a bit of a backstory here. This teacher I got is really cute and adorable, but normally she wears shoes like sneakers and stuff. Now see I have a bit of a foot fetish, and today was my lucky day since she decided to finally wear sandals. It's a small victory I suppose, but she's so adorable I just had to do a drawing of this little scenario I had in my head!
Also I don't know how to tag characters, the teacher doesn't need to be tagged obviously, but I'm thinking of keeping the violet haired girl as a character of my own. Her name being Violet of course, so if anyone can help me with that that'd be great!

Also! I know my work has a history of meeting the QCC, sooooo if there's any suggestions and tips and feedback stuff my ears are always open! :]
Grim
>> #55823
Posted on 2015-05-05 17:05:51
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overall, I really like this; please do more girl on girl feet oriented stuff

now, I'm no artist, but here's some suggestions as a consumer
you put some shading on the bodies, which is nice, but none on the chair, leaving it looking flat and odd
also, the teachers arm and hand; obviously, that hand is a bit big, and the arm is a bit long, being about the same length as the leg - try a more 3 to 5 or 5 to 7 ratio, I think

on a less technical note, 1) it would be nice to see slight nipple dents to indicate arousal, 2) since there is a focus on the feet, more detail there, perhaps flexing toes, would be nice 3) the prominent use of purples is a bit much - hair, magic, eyes and uniform all using various shades of it, 4) a version with some text, maybe in that blank upper left space, would be nice. I would imagine it could go something like
"...see how nice that is, teach? It feels so good to air out your feet after standing all day. So comfortable....so relaxing, so... arousing"
VioletRiot
>> #55846
Posted on 2015-05-05 22:39:31
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Grim said:
overall, I really like this; please do more girl on girl feet oriented stuff

now, I'm no artist, but here's some suggestions as a consumer
you put some shading on the bodies, which is nice, but none on the chair, leaving it looking flat and odd
also, the teachers arm and hand; obviously, that hand is a bit big, and the arm is a bit long, being about the same length as the leg - try a more 3 to 5 or 5 to 7 ratio, I think

on a less technical note, 1) it would be nice to see slight nipple dents to indicate arousal, 2) since there is a focus on the feet, more detail there, perhaps flexing toes, would be nice 3) the prominent use of purples is a bit much - hair, magic, eyes and uniform all using various shades of it, 4) a version with some text, maybe in that blank upper left space, would be nice. I would imagine it could go something like
"...see how nice that is, teach? It feels so good to air out your feet after standing all day. So comfortable....so relaxing, so... arousing"


Thank you so much! :D
You know it was actually a completely different picture earlier, I was gonna draw my character lying on the floor while one of the teachers feet would be between my characters legs, and the other would be on her lips or chest. But I'm still kinda new to drawing, and drawing her lying perfectly like that was a lot harder than I was thinking ahaha.

But thank you for the tips and everything, next time I'll definitely add more than just the pic, I'll do some text and probably some more details on the foot. [:
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