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Yuu-chan
>> #61755
Posted on 2015-07-02 21:17:31
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Commission for TheSleepyMind. Glad he likes it much better than I do! XD
bellchan
>> #61756
Posted on 2015-07-02 21:19:54
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Personally I find it adorable!

You should convey more confidence in your work, it's fine, I promise.
EdgeOfTheMoon
>> #61757
Posted on 2015-07-02 21:27:47
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bellchan said:
You should convey more confidence in your work, it's fine, I promise.


Yup! This is seriously great
Morgoth
>> #61758
Posted on 2015-07-02 21:37:44
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I really like how you draw panties. It is kinda lewd ^^
And the picture is adorable all around ^^
Anno1404
>> #61770
Posted on 2015-07-02 23:46:33
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EdgeOfTheMoon said:
Yup! This is seriously great

ITS AWESOME!
solddate
>> #61812
Posted on 2015-07-03 05:27:02
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Yuu-chan said:
Commission for TheSleepyMind. Glad he likes it much better than I do! XD

Not sure why you wouldn't like it. I can only think of two changes I'd make (one for each of the OC's eyes) and they're pretty minor ones, so I still rate it pretty highly
Yuu-chan
>> #61815
Posted on 2015-07-03 05:48:51
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solddate said:
Not sure why you wouldn't like it. I can only think of two changes I'd make (one for each of the OC's eyes) and they're pretty minor ones, so I still rate it pretty highly


Was that change to switch the irises? Penken already recommended that, and I tried it and it looked horrendous. I even tried playing with the eyelid heights while switching the irises around. I couldn't seem to make anything work, but that's to be expected of someone who doesn't know how to draw XD

solddate
>> #61819
Posted on 2015-07-03 06:54:48
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Yuu-chan said:
Was that change to switch the irises? Penken already recommended that, and I tried it and it looked horrendous. I even tried playing with the eyelid heights while switching the irises around. I couldn't seem to make anything work, but that's to be expected of someone who doesn't know how to draw XD

No, no. The irises and eyes themselves look fine.

-The change to her eye on our left would be to neaten up her eyelashes to properly separate them from the glasses and so they wouldn't look as 'squiggly'.
-For the eye on our right, I wouldn't include the line of definiteion for the inside of her eye for where the eyelid's closed, or at the very least edit it as it just looks a bit unnatural.
Yuu-chan
>> #61830
Posted on 2015-07-03 07:48:29
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solddate said:
No, no. The irises and eyes themselves look fine.

-The change to her eye on our left would be to neaten up her eyelashes to properly separate them from the glasses and so they wouldn't look as 'squiggly'.
-For the eye on our right, I wouldn't include the line of definiteion for the inside of her eye for where the eyelid's closed, or at the very least edit it as it just looks a bit unnatural.



Hmmm, I get what you mean about the left eye, but I'm not sure what "line of definition" you're talking about on the right?

Also, your making look at the eyes again made me realizes I left out Rose's eyebrows on account of mistaking the tops of her eyelids for them XD
Yuu-chan
>> #61833
Posted on 2015-07-03 08:04:25
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Just uploaded an edited version on my dA.
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