Posted on 2015-07-26 21:07:54
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Oh, nice update since the last one. There's a few things I'll ask/point out for the sake of critiquing, but otherwise, looks pretty good overall.

>I'm a little lost with the bondage strand(s) that goes further beneath her vagina. What part of her body is it exactly connected to/wrapped around on, cause I keep having trouble figuring it out?
>The left shadow is a bit too far beneath her and makes her look like she's floating a bit above it. Either that or her boots aren't entirely connected to the shadow. Maybe that's just me though...
>It also looks kinda weird compared to the right one in terms of style. I'm nitpicking that a bit, so don't worry about it.
>If you're the artist of this, you should probably make a tag for yourself indicating that that's the case. If you need help, I'll put it up for ya.

Posted on 2015-07-26 21:35:01
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Hi RedCollarBlackCollar

Your points were very fair and on spot. Don't worry about the nitpicking- Between this and the elf pic I also uploaded recently, I was just experimenting with shading and style. The idea behind the bondage was that the wand she had held in the left panel had been enchanted, and in the right its being used to tease and arouse, the bondage ribbon keep it in place and kept aloft by the wand. I tried to convey this via the green starry things, but I don't think it carried over too well. It was a complicated idea, and I feel that it was conveyed not very well.

>The shadow on the left. Yeah, that was a last minute thought. I was working with a lot of layers in Sai, and was using a shading layer (its called linear burn in Photoshop, but behaves somewhat similarly). Turns out that if you move out of the lines while messing with grey, it creates a brighter outline.

>Yeah... that's fair.

>I think I know what you're talking about. I added a gguy123 tag. Is that what you had in mind, or...?

Posted on 2015-07-26 23:55:46
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Ah, I had a feeling that was the case with the wand. Maybe it could've been a bit lighter, but I do understand what you mean now. Thanx for the clarification.



Yup, that's what I meant. I brought that up cause it helps people (like me) find any other images from a given artist when curious. That and the fact that it's good to know who the original artist is, cause it sometimes pains me to not know who would be behind certain pieces. >____<

If you ever want/need any feedback or idea suggestions, feel free to message me. I'm always happy to help (that and I'm sometimes just super bored outta my mind......)

Posted on 2015-07-27 04:53:48
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Sure thing RedCollar!