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- Id: 28033
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Posted: 2015-08-02 10:33:30
by PrincessLucina - Size: 1268x1275
- Source: www.gelbooru.com/index.ph...amp;s=view&id=2515342
- Rating: Questionable
- Score: 72 (vote up)
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>> #65477
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>> #65478
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A couple of problems I see with your manips though (mainly the text):
- Lots of text and always pretty small, maybe less is an option? Or split it into one text on the right and one on the left? Makes it easier to read on portable/small devices.
- Different colors make it good to see the difference between the persons talking, but try to make the flavortext (e.g. "Tiki gently pushed thetome aside, smiling.") a third color if possible. A blank white would probably fit best if you use a black background.
- You are using a lot of "dialog xyz" abc said/abc replied/abc yelled/abc exclaimed - almost exclusively through all your text. Try to mix it up and not include stuff like "blablub", Tharja said - if you can use the color to make it obvious which person is talking.
I see no problems with the graphical parts in this manip, but if you can make your story flow a little better it'll be even better. :)
>> #65479
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I really, REALLY like the darkness in this manip. It's well done.
A couple of problems I see with your manips though (mainly the text):
- Lots of text and always pretty small, maybe less is an option? Or split it into one text on the right and one on the left? Makes it easier to read on portable/small devices.
- Different colors make it good to see the difference between the persons talking, but try to make the flavortext (e.g. "Tiki gently pushed thetome aside, smiling.") a third color if possible. A blank white would probably fit best if you use a black background.
- You are using a lot of "dialog xyz" abc said/abc replied/abc yelled/abc exclaimed - almost exclusively through all your text. Try to mix it up and not include stuff like "blablub", Tharja said - if you can use the color to make it obvious which person is talking.
I see no problems with the graphical parts in this manip, but if you can make your story flow a little better it'll be even better. :)
Sounds good! Well, Improvement is ALWAYS an option! I do tend to use it a lot, just because that's how I usually specify speech, but, I can try not using it, and, I'll try out the Text Enlarging too. I can usually read it just fine, but, I understand how it can be tough on Mobile.
>> #65480
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>> #65481
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You have to also account for the site making your image smaller (especially if you edit higher res images) and fucking up an already small font. Thats why a bigger font is rarely a bad choice.
Noted. Yeah, I usually work with High-Res Images so I put out the best work I can. I'll try to get better with it.
>> #65508
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Only thing I can see that is strange.
>> #65511
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Purification tag?
Only thing I can see that is strange.
I put it as Tharja is basically going from Power-Crazy Dark Mage to The Servant of the Goddess of Protection (In Fire Emblem's World). It just seems to make sense.
>> #65517
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Purification tag?
Only thing I can see that is strange.
I think the best way to describe it would be reverse corruption. like instead of an angel girl becoming a demon girl, it's the other way around
>> #65525
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>> #65526
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hmm...mind if I make a fanfic outta this? I'm gonna change the ending though...
Sure! Just be sure to share it with me!