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tempter12
>> #66632
Posted on 2015-08-14 10:33:55
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This is my first attempt at both writing a hypnosis story and manipping, any constructive criticism and/or advice would be much appreciated.

Yuma, is a Digidestined from the game Digimon World Data Squad. She possesses the Code Key of Lust (the code keys can be considered somewhat akin to the crests from Digimon Adventure). She's also noteworthy for the fact she has no Digivice whatsoever. When I first saw this picture and immediately began think of it as her harem.

Regarding the text itself, I tried to tell the story from the subs perspective. For example, the fun house mirrors, are perfectly ordinary. They inadvertently inhaled some of the black dust which caused their breasts to grow.

I originally planned to instead focus on how Yuma developed her hypnosis system, but I felt it would be to long for a manip.

Oh, Sora is not in anyway hypnotized. In fact, Yuma is only willing to go though with her plan to hypnotize the others because Sora approves of it without being hypnotized.
GuardianAelita
>> #66636
Posted on 2015-08-14 11:55:04
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Hm... Not bad for a first attempt but if you want my advice, I'd try to edit the image a bit too. I mean, anyone can take an image and just put some text over it and call it a manip but I feel like a small tweak to the image may help the text greatly like empty eyes or spiral eyes or some sort of technology on every girl to make them look hypnotized. Maybe it's just me...
Ashura
>> #66639
Posted on 2015-08-14 12:39:22
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Good job for your first attempt
ClueElf
>> #66750
Posted on 2015-08-15 15:11:53
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Love the story! :D

GuardianAelita said:
Hm... Not bad for a first attempt but if you want my advice, I'd try to edit the image a bit too. I mean, anyone can take an image and just put some text over it and call it a manip but I feel like a small tweak to the image may help the text greatly like empty eyes or spiral eyes or some sort of technology on every girl to make them look hypnotized. Maybe it's just me...


Everyone has to start somewhere. And some images, like this one, are pretty great for caption-only manips.

HypnoHammer
>> #72123
Posted on 2015-09-30 06:26:53
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hey tempter12, any chance you can do a manip with Ranamon? or know someone who will
BritBoyToy
>> #178275
Posted on 2017-05-28 17:25:25
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Not bad. Just wondering though.... where IS Sora in this image? I mean, I see Leaf, may, Dawn, Kris, Hilda, Zoe, Kari, Rika, and Mimi, but not Sora. Is she off screen?
Legendary_Ranger
>> #446099
Posted on 2021-11-18 15:11:21
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We need more of Mimi and Yoshino here on the hub.
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