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Cradily
>> #67547
Posted on 2015-08-21 07:25:11
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If you can't tell already, I really like this artist. The caption's a bit rushed and pretty generic, so hopefully it's not too bad.

DrgnmastrAlex
>> #67548
Posted on 2015-08-21 07:50:37
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I like it. :D

Valgaav
>> #67549
Posted on 2015-08-21 08:02:01
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Honestly, and this is just my preference, but it would've worked better without the last snippet. Leave the people wanting more, and leave where it's going obvious from how she's acting each time.

Necros
>> #67551
Posted on 2015-08-21 08:23:44
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I pr3fer that the story, is actually finished m0st of the time, but in th1s occasion I agree.

Valgaav said:
Honestly, and this is just my preference, but it would've worked better without the last snippet. Leave the people wanting more, and leave where it's going obvious from how she's acting each time.




Toasterladd
>> #67560
Posted on 2015-08-21 09:29:31
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<3
More Cradily is always appreciated.

Cradily
>> #67568
Posted on 2015-08-21 10:54:03
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Valgaav said:
Honestly, and this is just my preference, but it would've worked better without the last snippet. Leave the people wanting more, and leave where it's going obvious from how she's acting each time.


Necros said:
I pr3fer that the story, is actually finished m0st of the time, but in th1s occasion I agree.


The last snippet was to 'connect' the story and the picture together. Otherwise the story would be she's in the pool swimming, and the picture she's suddenly out and taking off her cap. That being said, I probably could've worded it better/differently to keep it more open ended. I'll see if I want to change it tomorrow.

DrgnmastrAlex said:
I like it. :D


Toasterladd said:
<3
More Cradily is always appreciated.


Thanks, at least someone likes it =D

Valgaav
>> #67585
Posted on 2015-08-21 18:45:21
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Cradily said:
The last snippet was to 'connect' the story and the picture together. Otherwise the story would be she's in the pool swimming, and the picture she's suddenly out and taking off her cap. That being said, I probably could've worded it better/differently to keep it more open ended. I'll see if I want to change it tomorrow.


The story happens when she's out of the pool getting her time recorded, tho?

Cradily
>> #67606
Posted on 2015-08-22 00:04:36
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Valgaav said:
The story happens when she's out of the pool getting her time recorded, tho?


I don't know anything about swimming, so I had to google that stuff up. Time is usually recorded when they touch the wall, isn't it? I was also going off of this that I found:

<<dailyburn.com/life/fitness/swimming-workouts-tips/|Workout sets are often written out something like this: 4 x 100 on the 2:00. That means you have two minutes to swim 100 yards or meters before starting the next repetition in the set, for a total of four times through. Your rest is included in the two-minute interval (so the faster you go, the longer the rest period).>>

Which would be weird if they had to get out of the water each time, right? And she already has someone timing/recording her in the story... I don't know.

Dreamshade
>> #67622
Posted on 2015-08-22 00:43:56
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Cradily said:
I don't know anything about swimming, so I had to google that stuff up. Time is usually recorded when they touch the wall, isn't it? I was also going off of this that I found:

<<dailyburn.com/life/fitness/swimming-workouts-tips/|Workout sets are often written out something like this: 4 x 100 on the 2:00. That means you have two minutes to swim 100 yards or meters before starting the next repetition in the set, for a total of four times through. Your rest is included in the two-minute interval (so the faster you go, the longer the rest period).>>

Which would be weird if they had to get out of the water each time, right? And she already has someone timing/recording her in the story... I don't know.


Yeah, you normally wouldn't get out of the pool until you're done.

Cradily
>> #67633
Posted on 2015-08-22 02:23:02
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Dreamshade said:
Yeah, you normally wouldn't get out of the pool until you're done.


Hurray, I'm not crazy (maybe) =D

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