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Kayvaan
>> #69076
Posted on 2015-09-04 00:31:02
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I wasn't going to put text at first, but the empty eyes by themselves didn't feel sufficient. So I started writing something smaller and finished with a big text :)

Dizzy_Mallard
>> #69122
Posted on 2015-09-04 05:25:04
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ZeldaIsHot said:
I'm not trying to make it seem like I hate it or anything.


The lower case i makes me want to commit suicide.

ClueElf
>> #69167
Posted on 2015-09-04 18:32:53
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Dizzy_Mallard said:
The lower case i makes me want to commit suicide.

And yet you still have this picture as your avatar. :P

Kayvaan
>> #69178
Posted on 2015-09-04 20:42:22
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ZeldaIsHot said:
This is good work, one tip though: You might want to proof-read. Mainly just this part "Ho well, i guess I'll just make sure they stick to their words" I assume you meant "Oh well" as oppose to "Ho well" but if not, that's fine. But you should have used a capital "I" when saying "I guess I'll just make sure they stick to their words".
Just some handy tips, I'm not trying to make it seem like I hate it or anything.


I swear it ! I swear it upon my life ! ONE DAY I WILL WRITE SOMETHING WITHOUT TYPOS !!!!

Mr_Face
>> #69181
Posted on 2015-09-04 20:59:29
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English is a beach.

Anon_3.141
>> #70540
Posted on 2015-09-15 05:59:55
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Mr_Face said:
English is a beach.


It's the most difficult language in the world to learn, actually...

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