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  • Id: 29236
  • Posted: 2015-09-14 02:54:39
    by airegin416
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  • Rating: Questionable
  • Score: 294 (vote up)
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airegin416
>> #70396
Posted on 2015-09-14 03:00:08
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Hey. First post, so any feedback or help with tags is appreciated.
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>> #70403
Posted on 2015-09-14 03:37:11
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Triple: very good :D
Trippy: trippy likes her smile
Lisa: I like the handcuff belt
Bobbette
>> #70404
Posted on 2015-09-14 03:38:25
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I don't really do manips or artwork so my advice is just an average joe, but I can see an...aura? around the watch. It's like a circle that is sticking to it. I get that it's glowing so I'm not sure if it's intentional or not, but it seems strange to have a purple pocketwatch.
Reiner89
>> #70406
Posted on 2015-09-14 03:40:49
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The ending wasn't as sexy as hwd's dialogue. I could write better.
Bobbette
>> #70407
Posted on 2015-09-14 03:44:32
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Reiner89 said:
The ending wasn't as sexy as hwd's dialogue. I could write better.


Hwd has been writing stuff on manips for over a year looking at the oldest image he has. Give the guy a break :/ (unless sarcasm; that's hard to detect on the internet without verbal or visual cues)
DanGambino
>> #70412
Posted on 2015-09-14 04:03:28
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The standout thing for me is that the glow effect around the watch seems unnecessary. The dialogue works without it, and a swinging watch is already a sufficiently iconic hypnotic focus. Unless there's some specific point to it, special effects like that are really just "gilding the lilly", as it were.
Reiner89
>> #70414
Posted on 2015-09-14 04:09:41
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Bobbette said:
Hwd has been writing stuff on manips for over a year looking at the oldest image he has. Give the guy a break :/ (unless sarcasm; that's hard to detect on the internet without verbal or visual cues)


haha yeah I wasn't having luck offering to write dialogue for someone else so I figured I'd try reverse psychology
Zko
>> #70415
Posted on 2015-09-14 04:12:13
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Quick tip for pendulum animations, don't space out the distance between frames evenly, have the pendulum hang in the air a bit longer so it looks more real

<<www.renderography.com/wp-content/uploads/pendulum_swing.jpg|Like this>>
airegin416
>> #70416
Posted on 2015-09-14 04:19:16
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Zko said:
Quick tip for pendulum animations, don't space out the distance between frames evenly, have the pendulum hang in the air a bit longer so it looks more real

<<www.renderography.com/wp-content/uploads/pendulum_swing.jpg|Like this>>


Yeah, I tried to do that, but I don't think I had enough frames to make it look nice anyway.
Zko
>> #70422
Posted on 2015-09-14 05:12:48
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airegin416 said:
Yeah, I tried to do that, but I don't think I had enough frames to make it look nice anyway.



It not about frames actually, its all in the timing. You gotta exaggerate a bit, I did a quick rough of your gif to show what I mean with the timing, with 1 less frame than your original gif i.imgur.com/qGSAYGJ.gif . Also keep up the cool work, more animated stuff on the hub is always better
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