Posted on 2015-10-01 09:06:52
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I'm not sure how I feel about this one. The shading is alright, the coloring isn't bad, and the guy isn't horrible either. Unfortunately, the girl looks so weird here. The nipples are odd, her anatomy doesn't make any sense... And then there's her face. That combines with some typos makes this a really uncomfortable picture for me. Just attempting to provide you with a little constructive criticism, voyer. It's a lot better than what I could do. :P