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PolishGuy
>> #76627
Posted on 2015-11-09 19:51:27
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Any comments? I just started so any opinions and options would be helpful.

Toasterladd
>> #76631
Posted on 2015-11-09 20:56:19
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Not to be rude, but a proof reader would be beneficial.

Akuma
>> #76652
Posted on 2015-11-10 00:46:31
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I do agree - there is a few spots of engrish, but it's not terrible. Unless you're a grammar nazi.

JigglyWharf
>> #76717
Posted on 2015-11-10 09:50:23
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Akuma said:
I do agree - there is a few spots of engrish, but it's not terrible. Unless you're a grammar nazi.


"It's painful, but he do that!"

Sorry but if you're going to call someone a grammar Nazi for critiquing THAT, you're a fool.

himan3214
>> #76730
Posted on 2015-11-10 14:59:46
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JigglyWharf said:
"It's painful, but he do that!"

Sorry but if you're going to call someone a grammar Nazi for critiquing THAT, you're a fool.


Also it says "It's paintful, but he do that"
You missed out on that all important T x3

Akuma
>> #79827
Posted on 2015-12-07 02:33:34
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JigglyWharf said:
"It's painful, but he do that!"

Sorry but if you're going to call someone a grammar Nazi for critiquing THAT, you're a fool.

>Fool
>Fool
Are we seriously going to plunge into Ad hominems? Because I'm not willing to abandon Civility here.

somebodysaywaffles?
>> #332042
Posted on 2019-08-21 11:35:23
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Only on Hypnohub will you find people debating Grammar on a porn site LOL.

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