Posted on 2015-11-12 23:56:47
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Part 2 :)
Previous part here: hypnohub.net/post/show/31...olishguy_-manipper-swimsu

Posted on 2015-11-13 00:36:38
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I don't have a problem with you posting these, but could you please tag them "caption_only"? This picture has no indication of mind control, it's the story that makes it relevant to the site, so the caption_only tag is deserved.

Posted on 2015-11-15 05:51:30
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I count at least 7 typos, and a few awkwardly phrased parts as well... I like the idea of the manip, but it's really hard to ignore grammatical errors, especially when there are so many.

I'm going to assume English isn't your native tongue. You may want to have a native English speaker check your spelling before you post the manip to Hypnohub. I'm sure someone here would be glad to do it. If you have them correct the grammar/spelling first, then there won't be any problems, and everyone's happy with it!

Posted on 2015-11-15 08:29:19
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Is that Kurono Kurumu?