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blush breasts brown_hair caption caption_only deareditor empty_eyes eye_roll fellatio femsub hilda hypno large_breasts long_hair maledom manip nintendo oral pendulum penis pokemon pokemon_(creature) pokemon_black_and_white pokephilia psychowarrior_(manipper) text western

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psychowarrior
>> #78509
Posted on 2015-11-28 08:36:08
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Part of my weird idea of an ongoing manip series focusing on a somewhat perverse pokemon research facility.

Edit: Reuploaded due to a text goof.

FranzIsASissy
>> #78529
Posted on 2015-11-28 10:52:45
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You have some grammar issues in there.

If you're going for an 'science-person-is-speaking' attitude don't start in the action of the speech. Usually they state what they want to know (i.e. what they are researching) and why they want to know it first. Then comes the presentation of the facts and so on...
Also the text speaks of dissapearing people and just jump to the conclusion of 'hypno brides'.

I'd suggest you read some abstracts for articles in science journals to get a feel for it. Or go to youtube and look for presentations of research.

psychowarrior
>> #78572
Posted on 2015-11-28 21:50:58
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@FranzIsASissy

I'll consider it, but I hesitate reuploading the pic again since I think the Admins would frown on me deleting and uploading the same image multiple times. Also, this isn't meant to be the first entry in this manip series. The next one will be a bit more 'official' looking. If people respond well to it, I'll redo the others.

Mindwipe
>> #78573
Posted on 2015-11-28 21:57:11
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JimLogan54 said:
This looks like Sebastian's style...


Yeah, except for the everything.

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