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bottomless breasts caption cat_boy dog_girl eye_roll femsub furry green_eyes hammer iskra maledom manip original overwhored sex smile text topless twofaceddragon_(manipper) wolf_girl

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twofaceddragon
>> #78747
Posted on 2015-11-30 02:01:53
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The text for the most part was from a game called Overwhored. I just liked the bit of text so much, that I thought I would make something out of it.

Hope you all enjoy.
plsignore
>> #78748
Posted on 2015-11-30 02:07:30
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Overwhored's p.great. You should probably consider actually manipping the image somehow, though. Otherwise you're just slapping someone else's text next to someone else's image.

Also, the source should be a link to a website if possible, not the artist's name (we'd know the name from the tags)
twofaceddragon
>> #78750
Posted on 2015-11-30 02:18:19
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plsignore said:
Overwhored's p.great. You should probably consider actually manipping the image somehow, though. Otherwise you're just slapping someone else's text next to someone else's image.

Also, the source should be a link to a website if possible, not the artist's name (we'd know the name from the tags)


I see. I will be doing that next time.

Over all, the text has be greatly revised. It had too many NNNnnnNNnNnNnNNDSFHWE!!~~~ in it. So, I removed a large portion of the emotion sounds, and added dialogue. Sadly, I am also poor at artwork. I could try to remove the pupils from her eyes, but I am not very good at that. :-/ My mastery is really writing.

If you know of someone who could teach me how do do that on paint, I would be much obliged.
plsignore
>> #78752
Posted on 2015-11-30 02:29:42
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Gimp or Paint.net are both free, try those instead. And like, if writing's your mastery, then maybe you should write something entirely original instead.
twofaceddragon
>> #78754
Posted on 2015-11-30 03:04:43
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I usually do. This is the first one where I used someone else's writing for reference. For the most part, all writing is my own.

Since the writing was not my own this time, I thought it would be right to give the original source some credit, just like with the pic.
Valgaav
>> #78816
Posted on 2015-11-30 17:08:39
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Why would she want to be shaping the rods when he's the blacksmith? First line made me think the entire thing was his perspective...
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