animated animated_gif choker code_geass female_only femdom geass manip nunnally_lamperouge red_eyes spiral waverun_(manipper)

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waverun
>> #81279
Posted on 2015-12-18 04:25:14
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I decided to go with what AliensDidEverything did and posted an edited screencap. I actually did one before this very similar to this, but the spiral went off-center a few times in the animation so I decided to make a new one. That, and the animated solo Nunnally Vi Britannia post which had her as a Geass-Wielding femdom was deleted, and it was my favorite. I hope you all enjoy.
-Waverun

HypnoMangaEditor
>> #81318
Posted on 2015-12-18 17:34:40
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Well, there's no hypnospiral in Code Geass and this one is a little too dominant and looks oddly out of space.

It would have probably been better to work on a good geass animation.

waverun
>> #81321
Posted on 2015-12-18 18:03:57
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HypnoMangaEditor said:
Well, there's no hypnospiral in Code Geass and this one is a little too dominant and looks oddly out of space.

It would have probably been better to work on a good geass animation.


I know there isn't a hypnospiral in Code Geass, but this Geass power was based off of an image previously on here where she was using a Geass power that emmitted a hypnospiral from her face. Sadly, it got deleted, so I decided to make my own. And what do you mean by this one being out of space?

HypnoMangaEditor
>> #81327
Posted on 2015-12-18 21:33:16
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It doesn't fit the image or the series. The spiral actually makes the base image worse, at least in my opinion, because it doesn't contribute to it but obstruct the base image.

waverun
>> #81336
Posted on 2015-12-18 22:19:37
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HypnoMangaEditor said:
It doesn't fit the image or the series. The spiral actually makes the base image worse, at least in my opinion, because it doesn't contribute to it but obstruct the base image.


Then how should I make it. I sure as hell can't animate a geass like Lelouch's where his geass bird flew out of his eyes, animation and all. What should I make for Nunnally's Geass?

HypnoMangaEditor
>> #81454
Posted on 2015-12-19 07:10:06
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waverun said:
Then how should I make it. I sure as hell can't animate a geass like Lelouch's where his geass bird flew out of his eyes, animation and all. What should I make for Nunnally's Geass?

If you can't do something it is maybe time to move on, do something else and come back and do it when you can. No shame in moving a project down the line because it's not good enough and coming to it later once you have improved.

ClueElf
>> #81603
Posted on 2015-12-20 05:18:05
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HypnoMangaEditor may be right about the whole "hypnospiral isn't part of Code Geass" thing, but only people who have watched that show are going to care. That's not every viewer of this image. Besides, some of the best manips on this site go against the canon of the thing they come from. I think this image is great.

HypnoMangaEditor
>> #81605
Posted on 2015-12-20 05:46:30
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Yeah of course it is my personal opinion (I thought that this was clear). Others might see it differently. The image is not of low quality or breaks any rules so you can just let it stay here. I was just giving my honest opinion of how I think the image could be improved. :)

Cradily
>> #81621
Posted on 2015-12-20 09:43:46
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waverun said:
Then how should I make it. I sure as hell can't animate a geass like Lelouch's where his geass bird flew out of his eyes, animation and all. What should I make for Nunnally's Geass?


Maybe you can try to make the spiral fade out instead of having it end abruptly? So it doesn't stand out so much or something.

Also, the center of the spiral is usually the focal point. Having it in the middle of her face/nose makes the viewer focus on that instead of the eyes. Maybe you can try to have the spiral be slightly larger, but only visible after her face.

I haven't tested out my suggestions though, so I have no idea if it'll make the image look better or not. I need lessons in how to articulate my thoughts better >_>

waverun
>> #82285
Posted on 2015-12-25 00:28:29
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Cradily said:
Maybe you can try to make the spiral fade out instead of having it end abruptly? So it doesn't stand out so much or something.

Also, the center of the spiral is usually the focal point. Having it in the middle of her face/nose makes the viewer focus on that instead of the eyes. Maybe you can try to have the spiral be slightly larger, but only visible after her face.

I haven't tested out my suggestions though, so I have no idea if it'll make the image look better or not. I need lessons in how to articulate my thoughts better >_>


I could do that. I could make the spiral bigger so it surrounds her face.

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