Posted on 2016-02-24 13:22:24
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as i said before ive been in a vampire mood so here is another picture with two of my favorite vampire doms~ thanks again to zorro for putting up with my crazy mood swings lol.

Posted on 2016-02-24 13:28:53
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Shalltear is great in this pic...

However, I can't say same about Rachel. I mean... Maybe that blank expression on dom is matching, dunno. But her leg looks like it's not attached to rest of body. About 80 degree turn right, ~~110 up, at same time?

Posted on 2016-02-24 17:16:43
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Yeah, her leg does look weird.

Posted on 2016-02-24 23:52:22
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A few things I find to be kinda wonky:
>As previously mentioned, Rachel's right leg is at such a weird angle that it looks like it's a separate bode part. Also there's a lack of a high heel in the back of her shoe.
>The hands are either too big or too wide, and the fingers look very boney.
>Erika's waist + neck (probably whole body then again) is incredibly elongated.
>Rachel's placed too low to properly be standing off her left leg + standing on Erika's head.

I bother to be critical about this piece cause I really do like some of zorro-venom's pieces (especially the previous one of this), yet this one in particular feels really off. I'd like to see Z-V go back and try fixing up certain stuff, but idk what can or can't be fixed depending on time constraints. As usual, just my two-cents with this.

Posted on 2016-02-25 00:34:11
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*snicker* now then, when we remember they are corpses (looking at Erika's mouth, she too, now), displaced leg is not something that would stop them from having S&M play.

Posted on 2016-02-25 08:02:19
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Vampires are not undead like zombies are undead. Vampire are more symbolically undead in that they died but still have life (with different rules). Vampires were never corpses, otherwise they would be zombies. Therefore, the leg should not bend that way. For more on this, watch the monogatori series.

As for the rest of the picture, I really like Erika's expression, but I feel that Rachel's is too blank, and not condescending enough.

Posted on 2016-02-25 12:44:00
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hmmm well fortunately (unfortunately?) vampires dont actually exist so there isnt a SET list of rules for them. im sure that somewhere in some form of media there are vampire corpses that have funny joint bending~

that being said im not trying to defend the questionable anatomy in this picture. sure it has some flaws but i still think its a great picture.

Posted on 2016-02-25 13:16:44
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I do think this is the best rendition of Erika Zorro ever did. Very cute expression and the poses/angles are ambitious which is why it probably looks a bit wonky in places. But overall, it looks great!

Posted on 2016-02-25 13:39:49
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