Posted on 2016-02-27 15:44:47
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Please give me suggestions and requests if you have them :)

Posted on 2016-02-27 16:05:28
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How about something from the new Fire Emblem games? Camilla comes to mind... Maybe something dominating female Corrine? Just a thought.

Posted on 2016-02-27 16:29:18
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More railgun :P and maybe some rwby

Posted on 2016-02-27 16:45:01
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More tags~ please!

<<dagobah.net/t200/hypnotized_by_desu.jpg|
And hey, those eyes look familiar... >>

Posted on 2016-02-27 18:27:48
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For a second there, I was real confused when I saw the avatar... Thought I'd gone sleep-posting or something.

Posted on 2016-02-27 19:08:08
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+1 to both these requests.

Posted on 2016-02-27 21:16:58
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Suggestions. Right uh... First off, the eyes look alright, so I'll give you that. It's the screen that irks me. The spirals are just poorly shoved over something else, and you used three in an attempt to cover up the actual image on the screen, which doesn't work. I can still see part of the original image. You also just shoved the word "Hypnosis" over something, and yet didn't cover up the bit at the bottom talking about art, not hypnosis. For the "hypnosis" text, Hell, you didn't even try to align the pasted over text with the angle of the screen. All in all I think you just need some more practice, because this just looks kinda lazily done.

Posted on 2016-02-27 22:11:43
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ZyxS pretty much nailed it.

HypnOlster -

You did good pretty well on the eyes. Though zooming in reveals some jagged borders, the errors aren't all too noticeable at default zoom, so it isn't that big a deal (though is still probably something you should try to learn to avoid - having manips look consistent even while zoomed in makes for good manips).

What's holding this image back is the work on the screen. As ZyxS said, The added text isn't aligned properly and is on a white background, which very obviously contrasts from the background of the webpage itself. In addition, the spiral added over the image does not fully cover the image and is pasted rather willy-nilly three times. It's these problems that really drag this manip's quality down.

Now, before I go handing this to the QCC, I feel like it would be a better idea to suggest that you try to remake this manip, fixing the quality issues outlined above. If you decide to try and manage to do so, you can post it here and it can replace this one. If not, I'll put it up for judgment and you can go on trying other, new things. Whichever you want to do.

Now, IF you decide to try fixing it, here's what I recommend you do:

Note: Tool names may not be exactly the same as what I describe here, as I use GIMP and have little experience with Photoshop. Still, they both have a similar selection of tools, so this is doable on either.

* Use the Color Picker tool to select the pink-ish color of the background on the screen. The lighter pink of the various pinks on the background, such as to the very right of where you pasted "Hypnosis". With that color chosen, use the Paintbrush tool to completely "erase" the pasted "Hypnosis" text and its white background, as well as the entire image that you pasted spirals over. This will give you a clean, consistent-looking framework to work from.

* Use the Text tool to type "Hypnosis" where you had it before, except on the pink background instead of the contrasting white background you use in this version. Use a combination of the Rotate and Perspective tools to make the text align properly on the screen. Just play around with different rotations and perspectives until it looks right to you. Don't be afraid to use the Undo feature to try again if it doesn't look good.

* Paste a single instance of the spiral image in the center of the screen, where the original image was located. The goal is to have it look like that spiral WAS the image on that page. Like with the "Hypnosis" text, use a combination of the Rotate and Perspective tools to make the image align properly on the screen. Play around with the tools until it looks right, and don't hesitate to Undo and try again if needed.

If you can't seem to get the new "Hypnosis" text and pasted spiral image to look right using the Perspective tool, in this case it should also work if you JUST use the Rotate tool to align the text and image properly on the screen, since the perspective of the screen in this image isn't really that different from a straight, head-on perspective. However, I still recommend you at least try to use the Perspective tool first, because it's an important manipping tool when it comes to using props.

Posted on 2016-03-05 01:34:36
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Well...the wait has been long enough. I'll be bringing this up to the QCC.

Posted on 2016-07-15 22:54:06
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Wait how did this not get deleted holy shit?