Posted on 2016-03-28 23:21:41
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So, mister Piper haves a cool page were people can write hypno fiction with lolis!
And for a while I wanted to upload one, but was afraid because as you might know, my English is not perfect, so I asked him to please correct some misspellings and things like that and he agreed, the story is in this link,
www.asstr.org/~Piper/authors/grimest/tribaltotem.html
I hope if you have some time please read it and if you can gimme some feedback, good or bad I would appreciate it ^^ (but mostly good! Gimme love damn it!! xD)
The story is based in an fun RP I had one time with my friend Bokasa ( don’t worry Boki I credited you…bastard xD)
so this manip goes more or less on the vain of the story, hope you like it ^^ see ya

Posted on 2016-03-29 00:46:26
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Lucky Pillow-kun.

Posted on 2016-03-29 01:16:30
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Body*

Posted on 2016-03-29 01:21:40
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What are you up to now?

Posted on 2016-03-29 02:55:06
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Its great to see you posting to the domain, congrats on your first story and I really liked it a lot.

Posted on 2016-03-29 05:28:55
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Your story was really good! (sorry I can't comment on that site for some reason?)

Posted on 2016-03-29 05:46:35
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thanks a lot for the kind words ^^

Posted on 2016-03-29 07:36:24
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I'd like to explore her body.