Posted on 2016-04-23 18:42:33
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Hello everyone! Had a bit of good fortune recently and was able to commission this earlier than expected. I hope you all enjoy it and like that I chose Ran Mouri/Rachel Moore from Cased Closed and Videl from Dragonball Z. Now I just have to figure out how to hypnotize the two new girls. I really would like to have Akane hypnotizing an first with Videl watching and then trying to stop it before Makoto grabs her and holds her still. Then Makoto hypnotizes Videl using a new variation of her lightning magic. Either forming a spiral in her hand or lighting from her fingertips on Videl's head. I do have lots of time to decide but I would love to hear your opinions and ideas. ^^

Until next time everyone, stay cool! ^^

Posted on 2016-04-23 18:53:59
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this is pretty good. Where can you commission this guy?

Posted on 2016-04-23 18:55:57
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Here's where you can commission him. ^^ www.hentai-foundry.com/user/Oo_Sebastian_oO/profile/page/all

Posted on 2016-04-23 19:24:43
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Well, so long as you're taking suggestions.

Akane might show off the kind of "benefits" she's talking about, which Ran overhears Makoto saying as martial arts training. So Akane shows off her skills. But that's actually a distraction for the hypnotic effect she's actually employing, maybe by using something shiny on her wrists while she throws punches in a rhythm, doing the even monotone talking to lull her senses.

Videl notices this happening, but is out of position for the effect to take hold, and then Makoto finishes her off. How does that sound?

Posted on 2016-04-23 19:33:51
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Thanks! That actually sounds pretty! Good! I'll try to see what I can do with that. ^^

Posted on 2016-04-23 19:44:51
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I'm glad you like it. ^^ Yeah Ran is from Case Closed, a series where the main character, and her childhood friend, is a teenage detective and loves mysteries, dreaming of being a modern Day Sherlock Holmes. Only while on a date with Ran, he uncovers a criminal syndicate who catch him and try to kill him using a new poison to do it. But the poison doesn't kill him, it actually turns him into a ten year old kid. So using a fake name, he lives with Ran and her father, the comic relief detective that doesn't really have a clue, to find the sydicate and get restored to his true age while foiling the plots of kidnappers and murderers along the way using inventions from his friend, Dr Agasa, an old man whose his neighbor and an inventor. Ran herself is captain of her Martial Arts club and a school girl too. Its a pretty good series, but a very long one, almost as long as Pokemon, but the movies are very good. ^^ If you get the chance to check it out, I really recommend it. ^^

Glad you like Videl. Thought she would be good since there's not that much hypno art of her. I think There's a Jimryu picture of her and Android 18 in sexy lingerie here that's pretty special to me because it was my first commission I every made. ^^ I hope I can do her and the scenes of her getting restrained and hypnotized justice. ^^

Posted on 2016-04-23 20:44:42
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Glad to help. I tend to be an above average writer, but a pretty darn good muse.

This is really great so far. Can't wait to see more.

Posted on 2016-04-23 21:09:53
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Thanks. ^^ I'm really glad you like it. I have more ideas, like putting certain girls in certain groups. For instance, the waitresses are martial artists, one to serve the customers and one to cook the food. I'd like to do more pairings like this, but there are other girls to put into groups. I just hope I can do it right. Like ditzy Bunnygirls and the like. ^^

And that was a nice idea with having Akane using some kind of hypnotic focus but instead of an item, I though maybe a ki or chi based focus, since she does have a battle aura but not she's focused enough to use it instead of it popping up when she's mad. While she still can't make an energy blast, she can still do something so show off and show Ran how their training works as well as using the light to entrance her. ^^

Posted on 2016-04-23 21:38:23
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Yes, that could work. She normally only ever uses her battle aura when she's angry normally, but now that she's in a different state of mind she'll probably go for it.

Also, thanks for the link. I intend to contact sebastian shortly to commission a continuation of a Jimryu comic I requested last year (the one with Mariko and Akane). I'm thinking of continuing it like this, going through different artists and their interpretations.

Posted on 2016-04-23 21:41:04
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Thank'll be cool to see. ^^ I don't know who your next target will be, I'm guessing most likely Ranma-chan, but I do love Nabiki hypnotized. ^^ And I'll be adding her at some point to this, I just don't know when. ^^