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Juuzou
>> #100588
Posted on 2016-04-24 07:26:35
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Sorry for bad quality!

I'm trying to step it up in my drawings!

I would be glad if you guys give me opinions about what i could have done better it would help! ^^
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #100591
Posted on 2016-04-24 08:06:59
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Would probably be best to try and ink or use photoshop to try and make the lines much more pronounced. Also would highly recommend finding a scanner or use a good camera + lighting to make the pic less blurry.

Otherwise, my issue with the subject is how her hair covers most of her body and prevents us from seeing her outfit. Perhaps it was intentional, but I find it to be a bit of a shame.

You don't have to fix the drawing/subject itself, but I would ask that you make those lines more pronounced and eventually reupload it for a second attempt.
Amentibus
>> #100598
Posted on 2016-04-24 08:52:34
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First of all, good job on trying to get better! :)

Just like RedCollarBlackCollar said, it would be easier to give opinions with a cleaner drawing. If you don't want the hair to cover the body and preserve the same pose, you can give it some movement, it can make a nice effect.

Now, I think her arm is a little too short, or maybe I'm not seeing it well. You can look for some guides about dynamism too.
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