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  • Id: 36812
  • Posted: 2016-05-21 01:35:17
    by TGoperator
  • Size: 5226x9448
  • Rating: Explicit
  • Score: 84 (vote up)
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TGoperator
>> #105094
Posted on 2016-05-21 01:36:55
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My first Hypno Story finally finished the picture is of me the text of RedCollarBlackCollar. I hope you like it.
Phantom
>> #105097
Posted on 2016-05-21 01:45:59
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Okay first TLDR and second Full view is fucking too big!
StepfordCrimson
>> #105104
Posted on 2016-05-21 02:47:52
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Nice looking pic but GOOD GOD you expect us to read THAT much text? Especially with a full view THAT big??? :O
SeeDee
>> #105109
Posted on 2016-05-21 03:27:08
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Tldr: the guy woke up late and ran into a girl with a science project full of chemicals which spilled on him, to repay her for messing up her hard work he agreed to let them have a party at his house for the night. Soon his dick started to hurt and went to masturbate in the bathroom when one of the girls walked in on him. He found out his penis entranced the girls and used it on the rest of them to make a huge orgy with a dozen or so girls
StepfordCrimson
>> #105111
Posted on 2016-05-21 03:42:27
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SeeDee said:
Tldr: the guy woke up late and ran into a girl with a science project full of chemicals which spilled on him, to repay her for messing up her hard work he agreed to let them have a party at his house for the night. Soon his dick started to hurt and went to masturbate in the bathroom when one of the girls walked in on him. He found out his penis entranced the girls and used it on the rest of them to make a huge orgy with a dozen or so girls


Thank you
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #105126
Posted on 2016-05-21 05:10:50
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TGoperator said:
My first Hypno Story finally finished the picture is of me the text of RedCollarBlackCollar. I hope you like it.


Oh, glad to see this finally up after working on it back in February.The art came out great for it!

On a separate note, I was unaware that the story would be attached/a part of the image, so... it being this long was not exactly my intention. Beyond that, I'm not much a writer, but figured it would be nice to try and help out another user here on the hub. Was fun trying at least, and still glad to have gotten the opportunity. [shrug]
KaitoKid
>> #105146
Posted on 2016-05-21 05:59:14
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Oh, glad to see this finally up after working on it back in February.The art came out great for it!

On a separate note, I was unaware that the story would be attached/a part of the image, so... it being this long was not exactly my intention. Beyond that, I'm not much a writer, but figured it would be nice to try and help out another user here on the hub. Was fun trying at least, and still glad to have gotten the opportunity. [shrug]


As big as the picture is, I very much enjoyed the story and pic.
crepe
>> #105187
Posted on 2016-05-21 10:33:15
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KaitoKid said:
As big as the picture is, I very much enjoyed the story and pic.


Me too! But, readability would be very much appreciated next time
ChakatFirepaw
>> #105193
Posted on 2016-05-21 11:18:33
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This is pushing the story length that you should expand it into a proper story and submit it somewhere like mcstories.com
HypnoMangaEditor
>> #105225
Posted on 2016-05-21 19:25:00
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I like the background coloring. Fits the overall picture pretty well. I don't have any problem with having a big story and adding a picture to it (this is basically that, instead of the other way around), but I think the base picture isn't very good and the story is boring/generic. I am also not sure why you increased the Font size on that last third of text.
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