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Myuk
>> #113659
Posted on 2016-07-10 09:04:20
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The....end?

Blade_Dragonwolf
>> #113661
Posted on 2016-07-10 09:17:19
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Myuk said:
The....end?

Agreed... what? Horribly disjointed ending if it is indeed the end.

EoD
>> #113668
Posted on 2016-07-10 10:24:48
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I assume this was the number of pages that were commissioned

TophatBowlerhat
>> #113689
Posted on 2016-07-10 11:40:53
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Where is page 8?

TwistedMind
>> #113715
Posted on 2016-07-10 16:40:25
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Boo.

Posted on 2016-07-10 17:22:29
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So lemme get this straight...
>Girl falls into bad guys clutches
>Succumbs to a state of complete passiveness and can't understand what's going on
>Gets raped by bad guy
>Wakes up, gets punched, suddenly has sword on her
>Gets ready to fight bac-
>THE END
>...
>Profit?

TheGoodShank
>> #113718
Posted on 2016-07-10 17:29:20
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
So lemme get this straight...
>Girl falls into bad guys clutches
>Succumbs to a state of complete passiveness and can't understand what's going on
>Gets raped by bad guy
>Wakes up,


Page 2

Posted on 2016-07-10 17:46:55
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TheGoodShank said:
Page 2



I suppose, but...
still having trouble following :/

Andulusi
>> #113724
Posted on 2016-07-10 18:26:15
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Most of the story is a flashback, if that helps.

My understanding:


Dr. Hayes is a teacher and secretly evil. Ariela is a student and secretly some kind of heroine. Hayes has Ariela come to his office, and uses scented candles to put her in a trance. Then he rapes her, in the process "impregnating" her with a tentacle thing, presumably in preparation for his evil plot (which we never really learn about).

Then I guess off-panel he dresses her back up and probably wakes her up and says "you dozed off, go to bed" and she heads home none the wiser.

Two weeks later, Hayes has put his evil plot into action, and does something that puts everyone to sleep, but Ariela resists this because of her unspecified heroine powers. She's unwittingly still full of tentacle thing, and he has it go squish squish in her to shock her. She fights anyway.


And yeah, the pool skips from page 7 to page 9 for some reason.

X2
>> #113728
Posted on 2016-07-10 18:42:38
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It's a porno comic. Of course the plot isn't important ya nerds.

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