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3d barefoot black_hair blonde_hair blue_eyes bottomless brown_eyes female_only femsub long_hair multiple_girls original short_hair spiral standing standing_at_attention sweater voyer

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voyer
>> #114216
Posted on 2016-07-13 06:37:18
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pokefannafekop offered some criticism of the original version of this one, so I redid the lighting and tweaked the gals' poses and expressions a little. Not sure if it's better or worse, but at least it shows you how much a difference lighting can make to a scene.

pokefannafekop
>> #114235
Posted on 2016-07-13 09:50:49
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Well, you've still a ways to go, but it's much better. Now it's mostly up to practice and experimentation.

lasci_me
>> #114306
Posted on 2016-07-13 23:46:30
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Certainly improves the contrast and contours of the faces.
I know from my own experience with Daz that it's hard to portray expressions (or the absence there of), and hands are the bane of my life at the moment. especially thumbs

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