artist_request breasts bug_girl caption corruption femsub monster_girl multiple_eyes multiple_legs spacemedafighterx_(manipper) spider spider_girl spiderweb text transformation

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SpaceMedafighterX
>> #114731
Posted on 2016-07-17 02:16:19
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I made some captions a while back that I uploaded to Hypnopics-Collective; I'll be uploading them here. Yes, I know now that JPGs are not good for text, but I didn't know that for my first two captions.

Regardless, I have several images to upload, won't be doing them all at once, but if you like corruption, submissives becoming dominant, and monster girls, then keep your eyes peeled!

DanGambino
>> #114738
Posted on 2016-07-17 03:08:33
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Aside from my usual rant about, "No, Patrick, being a spider isn't hypno.", it might be better if you just took a transcript of the text, did a solid fill, and re-pasted it in.

HypnoticAura
>> #114745
Posted on 2016-07-17 03:49:32
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This is good, but the only thing I'll say is black on that shade of blue is seriously rough on the eyes. You might want to try using a more neutral colour scheme for the text and background of the text.

Cradily
>> #114746
Posted on 2016-07-17 04:06:23
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Dantus
>> #114749
Posted on 2016-07-17 04:17:37
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Cradily said:
<<hypnohub.net/post/show/24...bug_girl-curly_hair-femdo|Spyder girl manip fight!>>

Not really a fair fight now is it.

SpaceMedafighterX
>> #114834
Posted on 2016-07-17 23:06:36
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ZeldaIsHot said:
TFW not even hypno


I'm sorry if the mental transition was too subtle for your tastes, but it's pretty clear in the text. Her mind is forcefully changed from one state to another.

crazyman
>> #114840
Posted on 2016-07-17 23:28:49
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SpaceMedafighterX said:
I'm sorry if the mental transition was too subtle for your tastes, but it's pretty clear in the text. Her mind is forcefully changed from one state to another.


I can see the hypno, but its on shaky ground

DanGambino
>> #114843
Posted on 2016-07-17 23:42:35
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SpaceMedafighterX said:
I'm sorry if the mental transition was too subtle for your tastes, but it's pretty clear in the text. Her mind is forcefully changed from one state to another.


Reads more like, "Oh hey, I'm a monster now. Time to get revenge."

Dantus
>> #114874
Posted on 2016-07-18 01:21:45
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crazyman said:
I can see the hypno, but its on shaky ground

Lack of hypnosis isn't even the biggest issue this manip has.

Zelinko
>> #114883
Posted on 2016-07-18 02:42:32
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I have the original of that image saved. I don't know how you scaled it down but christ that's some heavy JPG artifacting.

More importantly

FIX YOUR TEXT!

Black on Blue is a pain in the ass to read.

I mean did you try reading this before you uploaded?

You want high contrast between text and the background color.

Black has very little contrast on Blue. White on Blue would have worked infinitely better.

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