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Heavenly
>> #115416
Posted on 2016-07-20 18:35:39
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If anyone sees a mistake, give a call. This time I kept a version in Gimp so I can easily modify more or less everything.

Hope you like it, I certainly had fun making it.

magictoaster
>> #115420
Posted on 2016-07-20 18:51:08
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I'm kind of confused, what's going on here? The text doesn't explain it very well.

Grendallmayo
>> #115422
Posted on 2016-07-20 19:15:48
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magictoaster said:
I'm kind of confused, what's going on here? The text doesn't explain it very well.


TL;DR= Some space travelers representing the Federation are roaming around the Venusian Empire's planet, their hull gets broken and they send someone to check on it. A team of Venusians get on board where the guy went to check the hull, and they're going to use their "weapons" to capture them.

magictoaster
>> #115423
Posted on 2016-07-20 19:27:17
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Grendallmayo said:
TL;DR= Some space travelers representing the Federation are roaming around the Venusian Empire's planet, their hull gets broken and they send someone to check on it. A team of Venusians get on board where the guy went to check the hull, and they're going to use their "weapons" to capture them.


I understand that, but where's the mind control? Is it supposed to be malesub? Is it Haruhi's god powers doing the mind controlling in order to create this scenario?

DrgnmastrAlex
>> #115432
Posted on 2016-07-20 19:59:33
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magictoaster said:
I understand that, but where's the mind control? Is it supposed to be malesub? Is it Haruhi's god powers doing the mind controlling in order to create this scenario?


I think the latter is exactly what's going on. :P

Pinkanator
>> #115433
Posted on 2016-07-20 20:03:08
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Wait, Venusians? As in those Venusians? The 50+ amazing pov femdom manip Venusians? Because I'd be down for more of them.

ClueElf
>> #115434
Posted on 2016-07-20 20:32:58
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Pinkanator said:
Wait, Venusians? As in those Venusians? The 50+ amazing pov femdom manip Venusians? Because I'd be down for more of them.


Not quite those Venusians.

pokemongirl
>> #115435
Posted on 2016-07-20 21:16:27
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No idea what's going on but those space suits very sexy *giggles*

Heavenly
>> #115440
Posted on 2016-07-20 22:26:14
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DrgnmastrAlex said:
I think the latter is exactly what's going on. :P


You are correct. I didn't know how to explain everything without destroying the flow of the story and making Koizumi do a huge infodump. And well, I felt like some ambiguity (Did I write that right) would add to the whole thing.

Basically, Haruhi warped reality into this NSFW space-opera after Koizumi and some of his Esper friends poked her subconsciousness in the right direction. This may or may not have been planned. Everyone is mind-controlled into being in-character, except for Koizumi and Kyon, because Haruhi wants to see their reactions.

If anyone can think of a way to explan that without breaking story flow, I would be happy to know.

As for the Venusians, they were sort of inspired by that long-standing series mentioned. Whether they would do that like them... well that is up to your imagination.

megahellreaper
>> #115472
Posted on 2016-07-21 03:07:07
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Heavenly said:
You are correct. I didn't know how to explain everything without destroying the flow of the story and making Koizumi do a huge infodump. And well, I felt like some ambiguity (Did I write that right) would add to the whole thing.

Basically, Haruhi warped reality into this NSFW space-opera after Koizumi and some of his Esper friends poked her subconsciousness in the right direction. This may or may not have been planned. Everyone is mind-controlled into being in-character, except for Koizumi and Kyon, because Haruhi wants to see their reactions.

If anyone can think of a way to explan that without breaking story flow, I would be happy to know.

As for the Venusians, they were sort of inspired by that long-standing series mentioned. Whether they would do that like them... well that is up to your imagination.


I think a couple of follow-ups are in order. And I'm talking about both sequels and prequels.

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