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bare_shoulders black_hair blush breast_press breasts breasts_on_tray breasts_outside caption elf elf_ears embarrassed femsub hair_ornament heavenly_(manipper) hypnotic_gas large_breasts long_hair looking_at_viewer maid maid_headdress maledom manip nipples open_clothes open_mouth purple_eyes ribbon smoke spiral_eyes standing symbol_in_eyes text tray unaware waitress

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Kayvaan
>> #116668
Posted on 2016-07-26 20:06:52
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Nicely done, especially the rainbow effect !

crazyman
>> #116671
Posted on 2016-07-26 20:38:15
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holy mother of unnecessary tags

EdgeOfTheMoon
>> #116676
Posted on 2016-07-26 21:19:15
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Nice! Little tip on the text though? The gradient gets lost in the background on the yellow. Maybe a border (grey or black?) might make it easier to read. If you copy the text to another layer make it black and blur it you get a quick border for text

Heavenly
>> #116680
Posted on 2016-07-26 21:53:11
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EdgeOfTheMoon said:
Nice! Little tip on the text though? The gradient gets lost in the background on the yellow. Maybe a border (grey or black?) might make it easier to read. If you copy the text to another layer make it black and blur it you get a quick border for text


Oh, I was thinking that the coloured text was a bit hard to read at the yellow part, but wasn't sure how to change that. Thanks for the tip! I will change that sometime and look if I cannot make it better that way.

ClueElf
>> #116681
Posted on 2016-07-26 21:53:44
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crazyman said:
holy mother of unnecessary tags

Only tags that don't go on any other images can even start to qualify as unnecessary. (And even that's not a foolproof test of uselessness.) Unless you're talking about tags that used to be there and aren't now, I dunno what you're talking about...

Heavenly
>> #116683
Posted on 2016-07-26 22:45:44
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Ah btw. for whenever I get to updating this one, how is the etiquette regarding uploading a new/better version of a picture? Do I just do it, or call a mod first so the older version is deleted?

Nikolai.exe
>> #116686
Posted on 2016-07-26 23:12:45
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im not sure how to read this

crazyman
>> #116689
Posted on 2016-07-27 00:14:56
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ClueElf said:
Only tags that don't go on any other images can even start to qualify as unnecessary. (And even that's not a foolproof test of uselessness.) Unless you're talking about tags that used to be there and aren't now, I dunno what you're talking about...



there was about 10 more tags when it was posted

Cradily
>> #116692
Posted on 2016-07-27 00:34:42
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EdgeOfTheMoon said:
If you copy the text to another layer make it black and blur it you get a quick border for text


I just go blending options -> stroke for an outline. The lazy way xD

ClueElf said:
Only tags that don't go on any other images can even start to qualify as unnecessary. (And even that's not a foolproof test of uselessness.) Unless you're talking about tags that used to be there and aren't now, I dunno what you're talking about...


Click 'post history' at the left side of the image under options to see tag changes.

Heavenly said:
Ah btw. for whenever I get to updating this one, how is the etiquette regarding uploading a new/better version of a picture? Do I just do it, or call a mod first so the older version is deleted?


I've always just did it myself. Then parent/child the post and delete to transfer votes. If the delete option is gone (aka been over 1 or 2 days) then you pester a mod to do it. Also, love the manip =P

Nikolai.exe said:
im not sure how to read this


Left side is the dom pov, right side is the sub pov. They're both happening in the same time-frame/instance, progressing from top to bottom.

liquidhobo
>> #116696
Posted on 2016-07-27 01:18:37
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Nice job here with the prop, smoke effects and subtle eye spirals. The rainbow colored text is a little hard to read, but I like what you're trying to do with it and it's pretty easy to make out when it's used sparingly in between "normal" text. At least on my laptop.

I really want to compliment your writing though. The hypnotist's part is fun but I loved reading the confused elf slave's point of view. It took a second to figure out what was going on but once I was totally on board.

Keep it up!

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